2016-02-20 19:31:16
Heya!

Since you left me such a wonderful review, I thought I'd come return the favour, and I'm glad I did!

How did you pack so much emotion into this?! It was terrifying, but passionate. Though there's not really any dialogue, I still knew the emotions in everybody, and I absolutely loved Regulus - you write him how I see him, with a secret soft side.

It has a very distinct writing style to it and I'm very impressed. I'm going to have to check out your stories now!

You write the horror of the hatred behind those considered blood traitor so that I can picture it all too quickly, and you had me hooked until the end.

The whole mood of the story is just so dark and ... stormy (see what I did there? ;) ). Every word just seems perfectly placed.

A truly beautiful piece.

Bianca xx
2016-02-20 19:31:16
This was really well done. Told through the eyes of the OC and her tormenting relationships with the Black brothers, you were able to convey the feelings of your character where the reader felt like they *were* the OC. Looking forward to reading your future stories :D

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