it has real potential to be a great long story
so keep writing
my only problem I found so far is a spelling mistake in blurb/summary thingmabob but that's only "ttouch" instead of "touch" so I'd go with its perfect!
in my story I got to the 5th chapter before someone told me I'd been missing the second e in Weasley-I ain't the brightest the whole time and like making words up :)
anyways keep writing because I want to know what happens next
from me xx
Author's Response: Thank you soon much for commenting! I realized the "ttouch" only when you told me.thanks! And that second e in Weasley can be hard:)
will update the next chapter soon, me
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