2015-10-20 21:56:04
Hello Astoria G M

Thiss was a very intenssse one-shot. I loved that you chose the ssecond POV without sspecifying the character portrayed, it makes it very interactive for the reader, as it immediately draws one in.

The ending was bone-chilling and I really liked that you kept the paragraphs short as it made it all the more intenssse.

The struggle for life was very well written and the dessscriptions were very vivid.
This read was exactly what I was looking for, thank you for writing thiss.

The Basilissk

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