Another good story. In reading this and the other story I'm noticing a unique style that is purely you. I like it and honestly not everyone has their own unique style and voice that when a person starts reading the know it is you. So, your writing does stand out in a crowd and that is a good thing. I like it.
This story was an interesting read, just enough lust to make it good but not over the top, not to say things would have been bad if Ron, Harry, and Ginny didn't arrive to find her. I particularly love the way you worked things that this story could have actually happened in cannon. There is nothing that could really negate this.
For "CC" I think I only saw one typo and honestly I can't remember where it was, I'm sorry. I read the story before bed but didn't have the where-with-all to type up a review and I figure you would appreciate a coherent review, not to mention I felt you deserved a coherent one.
Over all, good work Gee, I just might have to find my way to a couple more of your fics.
Author's Response: Hi Marshal, thank you very much for your loving review!
I really appreciate the thought of having a writing style!! :D
I like to think Hermione would have slapped him in panic if the gang hadn't arrived to bring her back to her senses ^^' (that would've been the alternative ending, to be honest, hehe)
I'll try not to obsess about that typo :p
Well, this was quite a bit of lust (I must confess, not really what I love reading most...) But, I did enjoy a lot the humour, the lightness, the levity of it all. I really enjoyed the similar-parody tone of the piece (not sure if that was what you were trying to do?)
I particularly loved the beginning, with Hermione wandering around her realm of books humming. I chuckled a lot! :D
And I also enjoyed how you wrote their dynamics. The physical attraction, the consequent confusion, the fighting, the craving... It all worked really well and was fun to read! ;)
Ahahah! Harry and co. come to ruin the fun! Sometimes the Marauders' Map is a true pain... :P
Wondering if it will actually never happen again, or is Hermione is only deluding herself?
All in all, an enjoyable story. Thank you for the swap! :)
Author's Response: Hi Chiari :)
I feel that way too, mostly because I feel that lust is often depicted in a crass manner. The passion itself is what makes one blush, not the unmasked genitals xD
It is definitely parody-like; kind of like the stereotypical Dramione with the banter I loved reading about most and that hate/maybe-love relationship.
I always found Dramiones fun and I realized that it was the kind of Dramione I wanted to write. :D
That makes me happy! Especially because I thought it would be a really cute trait to bookworm Hermione!
Yep, that's what friends are for! Haha! ^^
There will most probably surely be a sequel just a fluffy and senseless ;D
It was a great swap, I'd love to do one again some time! Hugs
The sentenceses were simple but meaningful. Every word of it described what was going on, how a person is and their feelings. I was intrigued by the simplicity of the way you have brought it that as soon as i read the first sentence i wanted to know more of what's going to happen. The twist at the end was unexpected. Seriously.it would have been nice if it was a novel or just a short-story. I enjoyed reading this.
Author's Response: Hello Marie Zenna,
thank you for the very kind review! It makes me very happy every time I read it ♥