2015-08-18 18:14:08

I have finally found some time to stop by and give this a read and a review like I'd been wanting to since you posted about it! :)

I really like this. It is interesting to me to see the inter workings of the Malfoy family. It plays well in contrast to life on how we remember certain things much better than we do others. Especially the things we remember when we're younger compared to as we age.

I really think that you do a fantastic job of setting your story up in this chapter and I am really eager to find out more. You've done the hook, line, and sinker here! :)

Keep up the good work and please let me know when Chapter 2 is added!!


Author's Response: Thank you :)

I've been having major writers insecurity but everyone on here has been giving me such good feedback and constructive reviews that I'm determined to carry on with this now. Hoping to do a bit of work on Chapter two today.

Thanks again



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