I like how you've used different tones of voices in the flashbacks as compared to what she's doing currently.
It seems like back then there was a semblance of normalcy about her but as you've said, she was surrounded by A LOT of crazy. So she went a bit loopy herself. I like your style of writing :)
Author's Response: That's actually what I was going for. I was kind of hoping I myself didn't come across as a loony. Yeah the next chapter is actually more than halfway done so it'll probably be up in a few days!
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