This story sounds like so much fun! Crystal, Scorpius, and their friends all seem like rad dudes. I hope they convince Crystal to be part of the pranks, she'd have a real good time trying to stay out of trouble. And that Albus Potter, what is she going do to with him? Anyways, this is really good for it being your first story. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: you're so sweet thank you for your insight
I based Crystal off of what I strive to be like, so it's flattering that you think she (and her friends) are rad. you are so so great. thanks for reading and reviewing xx
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