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2015-08-31 10:06pm
Sque. Albus Scorpius!! They are my favorite right now and I love it!

At the beginning of this story I thought that Albus was having qualms about coming out to his parents. I could understand the anxiety of that. But it's so nice to have Scorpius there to help Albus calm down who seems to have an anxiety issue- over stress and people pleasing probably. But it's nice that a touch can calm him down.

But the problem seems to lie in the fact that it is a Malfoy that Albus is dating and not the fact that it is male. Whigh is a better reason to freak out.

And how perfect are Harry and Ginny! Gah I love them. Ginny is in tune with the needs of her son and Harry just accepts Malfoy as a regular kid. He's all I'm Harry Potter. It's nice to meet you. What? Who does that?! Harry Potter does that. And I love it.

This was so good. You captured the family so well and the nerves of something that seems so big to young Albus. It was great! :)

Frankie

Author's Response: I didn't clearly specify it but, in my mind, I definitely came to the conclusion that Al has anxiety issues so I'm really thrilled to hear that that came across to you. I tried to make the stress more about Scorpius being a Malfoy than him being a male because I tried to envision a more accepting future for differing sexual orientations.

Thank you for the very kind words and positive review! :)
2015-07-28 9:06pm
What a lovely one-shot! This story was fabulous! Its hard to find good fanfiction in general, even harder to find good slash fics, but you were able to do both. Your writing is great, your characters are great, the storyline is great. The emotions and personality that you put into Al and Scorpius fantastic. Overall, I loved it! No constructive criticism here. I can't wait to read more of your stories! :)

Author's Response: Wow, this is such a great review! :) I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed this story and every little aspect of it.
2015-07-28 6:52pm
Really good story I loved the fact that they are so loving to each other

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed and I'm glad that their feelings for each other came across well in my writing.

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