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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DraconisScarlet3792 Getting to The Quidditch World Cup

23rd February 2014:
At least it isn't an old boot or something so small they can barely all touch (like a penny).

Author's Response: yeah, i was thinking a large boot but i thought i might need something larger. so i went with a chair. :) thanks for the review

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Review #2, by HazelMidnight172 Arrival

22nd February 2014:
Interesting idea! I'm very interested to see how this turns out, particularly if/when the others find out who Drake really is. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, keep them coming! :D I'm still working on it but it might take a while... damn education taking up all my time for sleep, tumblr, and writing... grrr... haha, I really hope this story turns out well. I really want to finish it!
thanks again, enjoy the story! :)

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Review #3, by befuddledbroomsticks The Start of Something New

19th February 2014:
Hmm, this is interesting, I can't wait to see where you're taking this. I would advise - if you even want advice, haha - that you put more detailed descriptions in and more monologues so that we know how he's feeling and all. But otherwise, nice plot! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. I know it is a bit dodgy but it's because I started a story a while ago and I just recently found it again. So I continued on. haha. I really hope it turns out well though. any advice you got, give it to me. I like putting my ideas onto a page but it doesn't mean i'm a decent writer. I do need to improve on my basic writing skills. But any help would be great! thanks again for the review. Enjoy the reading!

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