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This story is so promising!! I'm really excited to read more into Draco and Luna's story :) Please write more soon !!

Author Response

Thank you!  I'm working now on getting this updated.  I appreciate the feedback.  :)

Well hello Lady Cailan. I am here with a much deserved first review! My mission is to review ten stories without a review and you are the first person I selected! 

I really love the fact you didn't just dive into Draco and Luna being together (though they are my secret One True Pairing). It really is hard to think of Draco as having a heart or having it crushed by Pansy of all people. The fact she was actually pretty was a nice touch (I think Jo was a little bias personally anyways...)

The quote that started the chapter was quite lovely and fitting. I am surprised I have never heard it before now. I wonder how long that betrayal will fester inside Draco... Hopefully it causes some drama, yes? Especially with Blaise- that would be something to see! I love fact that no one really cares, because there is an issue if the Draco Malfoy is overreacting to something...
Keep up the good work dear!

XOXOXOX,
LLG

Author Response

Hi - and thank you for choosing my story to read!  I've just added another chappie so that should be validated soon, I hope.  I'm also glad it was this story - as it features a less popular pairing.  I hope you continue to enjoy and thank you for your lovely review; it's always appreciated.  :)

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