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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Bookmonkey BOOM, BOOM, POP

26th June 2015:
Awww. This was a cute story. I think you captured the emotional ups and downs of the characters well. I got a little confused on the time thing though, still not sure when time 0 is I guess. But I think that adds to the whirlwind of emotions/events well actually.

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Review #2, by Wildmoon BOOM, BOOM, POP

20th December 2013:
Wow, that is a lot packed into a short story! After the competition is over, I'd like to see you expand on this. I love the kids' POV, it would be fun to get more into the headspaces of the adults, especially Andromeda and Harry.

Well done, very emotive in such a short space!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I liked the idea and would have liked more time to edit it, but oh well. :) I'm glad you liked it, I'll try to add more later. :) Thanks!

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