I guess it's a good thing I only found this story yesterday, as you just started updating again haha! I'm loving your story so far, with your character interactions being a lot of fun to read. Nina especially, with her quirky yet adorable attitude, is a blast.
I'm a little curious (and maybe you'll address this later) about the reactions of Alaska and Caroline to the whole Nina/James discovery (and to a lesser extent, the Albus/Caroline thing as well) in Ch. 9, because after the initial escape by Nina I figured they were bound to discuss it at some point before the holidays once they had caught up with her. It just seems like that was kind of lost in the chapter transition. But, again, I wasn't sure if you were planning on bringing it up during the holidays at some point, maybe just with Nina thinking back on a talk with them. Anyway, looking forward to the next update! Please don't wait so long this time! :)
Author's Response: That is very lucky timing for you! To be honest, my original draft of this chapter did have an Alaska/Caroline/Nina talk at the beginning, before they boarded the train, but it really wasn't coming out properly or fitting well in the chapter. I'll definitely put it in the next couple chapters at least because Nina needs to talk to her friends- just need to find a spot where it flows nicely in the story. Thank you so much for reading and for this review!
- Adi xx
“You look like there's a high chance of you getting pregnant tonight.” made me laugh :-D :-D :-D
liked seeing Leo again and learning more about Nina's family. excited to see how her spending Christmas with the Wotters goes. loved the ending :D
This was very funny! good work(:
Oh please please finish definitely this story. Nina and her friends are awesome and so are the wotters ☺😊
Author's Response: Ch 10 is in the queue! Your review made me finish it, so thank you x
Hope you havent stopped writing I'm really enjoying this story! Please keep going! (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your reviews! I haven't given up on Mindset, just trying to figure out where exactly the plot is going before I continue. It's the holidays soon so I'll hopefully get some writing done. Thanks for your patience and kind words!
- Adi x
I really like this so far! :) Great story!!
Author's Response: I will be continuing! Thank you for reading + reviewing!
I've just read this story for the first time, I found it from your author page from reading your new one shot james/oc and love this story so much!!! It looks like it's been a while since you've updated so hopefully that means you've got an amazing long chapter lined up? I shall hope yes because otherwise I will be devastated!! I wouldn't be surprise that mindset has over 4000 reads because it's so great!! No wonder people want to read it. Anyways please update because you've got such a great style!! Xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for both your reviews! Is it embarrassing that I couldn't stop smiling?
But really, this was lovely and I'm actually working on the next chapter of Mindset right now.
- Adi xx
Brilliant. I can't wait until it's the holidays!
Author's Response: Thank you, the holidays shall be filled with plenty of Wotter shenanigans- get keen!
- Adi x x
Perfect!! I love, love love it. You are so funny too, it's just so good. Please oh please update soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love, love, love you for this review and the next chapter should be up in a day or two.
- Adi x x
Oh.my.god. Please. Keep going.
This fanfic is AMAzING! and I officially love you. Don't get weirded out or anything. Hehe. But yeah PLEASE keep going!!!
Author's Response: Oh wow thank you so much! I haven't got plans to stop any time soon, and I love you too for this review x
How do you feel about Jina/Names kissing (twice! I mean technically three times but whatever)?
eh ma gawd i ship them!
What do you think will happen when they actually talk about it?
Nine is going to be a bit of a nutter and tell him she want to be just friends or snog buddies or something equal stupid.
Are you shipping Calbus?
Do you want some highlights from the party in the next chapter?
ummm.maybe a bt of coraline and albus?
Did you like James' P.O.V? Is it something that you would be interested in seeing again?
Absolutely 100% yes to more James POV
Could you figure out the riddle before Nina answered it later on in the chapter?
Where do you think Al is rushing off to?
TO MAKEOUT WITH CORALINE
Anywho, great chapter :)
Author's Response: Ah thank you for answering the questions!
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, hope you keep reading x x
James pov?? OMG I think yes!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried that people wouldn't like a James POV so it's a relief to know that you're excited :) x x
I really like this story. The girls can get a little obnoxious sometimes though but I love them none-the-less. Keep writing and update soon xx :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you like the story! New chapter should be up very soon so keep an eye out x x
this was an excellent chapter
Author's Response: Thank you x
Great first chapter! I am excited to see where the story will go.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing my story! I'm also excited to see where it will go and I hope you keep reading long enough to find out with me x
Great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Next chapter should be up soon x