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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by SereneChaos The Mark of Destiny

14th January 2014:
This is so cool! It's neat to think that the Founders have the power to bring Harry back to life if they want to! These first two chapters have been awesome to read, though since I haven't read your previous stories, I'm not too sure I know what's going on, haha. I wonder if the AN at the end of this chapter would be better suited for the end of the first chapter. Whatever the case, you're off to a fantastic start, and good luck with the rest of your story!

Author's Response: Yes, it is better to start at the very beginning, Harry Potter and the Twilight Dragon. Thank you for your support, and don't forget to spread the word!

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Review #2, by shez A Mad Game of Chess

14th January 2014:
This is a brilliant read and honestly deserves more reviews. For some reason mysterious action adventure stories are so scarce/underappreciated on HPFF these days (writing one myself hehe). From the very first chapter I can tell that not only do you have a magnificent idea in mind but also the technical writing skills to support it -- You're prose is flawless. I'd comment on plot but I have no idea where this story intends to go (man I love mysteries!)

I can't wait to read on and I can see this slowly becoming one of my favorites.

shez :)

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Review #3, by indyheart The Mark of Destiny

4th October 2013:
Sorry for the delay, been so busy. Your writing is amazing! I'm hanging onto the edge of my seat, hehe.

Author's Response: I suspect that will be your new home for the remainder of the tale. I certainly don't intend to disappoint with the last two installments, which would be this story and the next. After that...who knows?

Thank you once again for your kind words. Onward!

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Review #4, by indyheart A Mad Game of Chess

3rd October 2013:
I'm so surprised that you do not any reviews yet. I thought that this, the first chapter, was absolutely brilliant. Perhaps a bit confusing since it's relatively AU, but I'll get my head wrapped around the plot in no time, I wager.

You're a great writer and I was impressed with how well-written this was.

I spotted one typo..
"If you need us to make him talk - " said the last one began [again]

Kudos! I will be R&R as the day progresses but there may be hours in between each review. Sadly, laundry, dinner, etc. cannot be put off too much longer. :)

Author's Response: I'm not perfect, nor do I have any desire to be. If I give you one moment of joy throughout my entire fanfiction series, just one moment, I will count it a success.

Thank you very much for the glowing review. As I have said previously, it is for fans like myself that I have written these stories. I felt Harry's story had much more to be told, and I wanted to give back by helping to tell it as I see it. I only hope that I have done his legacy the justice it so greatly deserves. I have several chapters waiting to be submitted, and I hope you will enjoy them as much as I did. Don't forget to spread the word. Onward!

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