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That was sooo good, when is the next one? I want to read more!! :D

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Wow, this novel was beautiful. Your character building was spot on. I can't wait for the sequel. Will you still be doing it? 
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Where are you I ??? I would love to read more of your stories...please come back soon

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Nice! This is really a good story. You capture the characters really well and it's a pretty funny story.

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I think that the boys were indeed treated right. I don't of spanking usually,but frankly Sirius deserved it  for insulting Severus and starting a fight. Severus also needed to be disiplined for responding to Sirus's insults.

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Awesome! This is turning out to be quite a story. The only thing that could be better is fixing the few grammer mistakes in each chapter.

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Good job!! This story is coming along nicely. But, there are a few gram er errors in this chapter, nothing big but still noticeable.

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This is turning out to be a pretty good story so far  what with Harry and Severus finally understanding eachother and such.

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Aw,this chapter is so cute and heartwarming. What I liked the best about this chapter is how Severus slowly learned that unlike before he would have a safe and happy life.

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This is also an exleccent chapter. I like how you elaborated on the missing parts that you left out in the first chapter. I also like how you got Sirius and Snape to come back.

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I liked this chapter. It was a good introduction to the whole story. I particularly liked how you gave the whole history of Harry Potter and his friends through out the whole chapter.

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I am still coming back to this and reading it.  It was a really good story.  I miss not having new stories of Harry and Severus to read.  Thank you for the opportunity to get swept up in another adventure.  I hope there will be more to come.

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I loved this story, and wish the sequel was already written, haha. But I know you have other stories to finish first. It is hard to believe that you have 59 stories but that just proves you have a unique imagination, and can make the fantasies into reality. Continue the great work and hope to see more from you.

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So, will James fall in love with Cecelia ?  I am guessing Teddy  will  hook up with Victoria. Who will Sirius fall for? Rosie will be with Scorpious and Alby and Frankie? Or will we have other characters?

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Plsss Unveiled 2 quiiick!!!

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Oh man. Please give us part two! After reading this, I'm hooked on the storyline and my imagination cannot do it justice!

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loved it. what a fantastic story.  fell in love with snape as a kid.

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I love the story, will you ever finish it? Why did Lily refuse to accept Severus's apology fifth year? Will he forgive her now that they have a second chance?  Where did Snape learn to fly without a broom?

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Loved your tale from beginning to end...

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Hello!!Please write more..i love your story!!

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I really liked this story. I was wondering how you were going to end it. I do hope to see a sequel at some point. For now I have to go back and find something I didn't finish reading.

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That sure was a surprise. I can imagine twins since my two oldest children were born in the same year, but triplets seem overwhelming. Poor Ron. I wasn't sure he'd survive the births. I'll finish reading this story tomorrow. I've sure enjoyed it.

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I wonder if they'll have twins. I can understand that Lily  felt that she had to apologize to Severus but it seems she just brought up bad memories. I think Sev will forgive her eventually.

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I thought Harry was a goner. I think Severus will help Sirius as best he can to get rid of bad memories. This is such a good story that I'm sad I'm almost finished with it.

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Exactly where is Harry unless he's the one destroying the castle. I still think the Death Eaters should've been killed. Maybe it's worse they're going to Azkaban. They probably didn't want to kill in front of the children.

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