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Reading Reviews for Wisps of Smoke
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by TheSilverDoe7 Chapter 1

5th January 2013:
This is a brilliant FanFic!!! It really showcases Draco's character, with a bit of depth, and shows the true him. I like that you've stuck with the Draco we all know as well instead of completely changing his character. You have a real talent! Having the story that short but still being able to really show Draco's character - also without having the whole thing in his point of view - is just great! Really good FF! :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you, thank you, thank you! That's a really great compliment, and I'm so glad you liked the story. Draco's characterisation was really hard to do, especially in such a short story, and I was afraid he'd come out rather weak. But I'm glad he worked for you. :)

Once again, thank you so much! Your review made my day :D

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Review #2, by AHarryTale Chapter 1

5th January 2013:
I love this! One of my favourites! I'd love to see more chapters on it, I was so drawn to the plot. Well done, you're an amazing writer :)

Author's Response: Ooh, thank you so much! I think I'll be doing a sequel to this, in around June or something (I'm working on something else at the moment, sorry for the lateness :P).

Thank you once again! :D

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Review #3, by BookFan85 Chapter 1

4th January 2013:
makes no sense Colin Creevey was not a Muggleborn he was at Hogwarts and they only let in those that were pure blood and half blood no Muggleborns that was the whole point of registration for Muggleborns that they had to prove they had magical blood in their family line if not they were sent to Azkaban

Author's Response: You oughta read the battle chapters properly. Colin snuck in during the battle. Harry also saw his dead body while going off to meet Voldemort. Page 556 of the UK edition of the book (chapter 34, The Forest Again) says, "Colin Creevey, though under-age, must have sneaked back just as Malfoy, Crabbe and Goyle had done. He was tiny in death." I'm rather serious about my HP fanfics, so I do my research properly before writing stories. :)

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Review #4, by amna Chapter 1

4th January 2013:
wow!! this is amazing piece of writing! you captured Malfoy's character very precisely. there was depth to it!! you certainly have good writing skills!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. :D That's a great compliment. I'm really glad you liked it! :)

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