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PLEASE UPDATE I LOOOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. 
your writing is incredible, you're very talented in the way that you write. it's very clever and funny :)

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Awesome story! I seriously love it!! :D
Please update soon! :)

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Oh my god I'm in love with this story. It's just amazing!!! Loving all the characters and descriptions etc but the storyline is sooo good. Once again- AMAZING!!!

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Wow! I love love love love this story!!! Witty, intelligent, unique... by far one of the best stories on this website!
I love all the extra details you give; it makes the story even richer and more colourful!

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I really like this. Hope more chapters will come soon:)

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Thank you so much! I appreciate your commenting, it shows that you really did enjoy the story. Don't worry, the next chapter is already in the queue! - omni

Yay! I didn't expect chapter 2 to be up so fast! :)

I liked the character development in this one... Eryin REALLY doesn't like Quidditch, and geez... Lily is quite a little spitfire!!
I already have a strong dislike for Sarah. She is way too liberal with other people's boyfriends!!

Awesome chapter! I can only hope that the next one comes as quickly as this did!!

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Oh, hah, I also didn't expect a double comment, you lovely thing! I'm trying to keep my chapters written ahead of time so that I can pop them online when the previous one is validated! The next one's already waiting for approval. Yep, Sarah is a little too friendly, we may see more of that later...heh. - omni.

Auggghh! This is awesome!!

You write with a clever voice and a clear sense of direction. I like that about this chapter. Normally in the fanfiction I've seen, stories with summaries like yours (which drew me in to read it!) usually start off with long, drawn-out introductions. But this proved my suspicions wrong!

I already like Eryin;she seems to be a girl who is crazy without being stupidly insane, if you know what I mean. The whole list aspect intrigues me. It's pretty different, and I anxiously await the next list. 

All in all, smashing beginning!

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Thank you! I can't promise there won't be any long, drawn-out introductions to any chapters, but I prefer to start a story with a bang, rather than a sigh. Eryin's pretty fun - she'll probably get a bit crazier before the end, but I like my characters to be intelligent, too. Keep reading, I hope you continue to enjoy it! - omni.

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