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Review #1, by bittersweetflames Who's to say it isn't real?

20th July 2015:
Hiya, Cassie!:)

I am so happy that we have this House Cup Event!;) I can actually read and review more of your wonderful stories! Anyway, this one was really beautiful.., it captured that fairytale-like atmosphere that I really truly enjoy.:) The voice who is telling the story has this really magical tone and its full of love and wonder and amusement that you can't help but feel all thosr things as well. So I really loved that you've chosen Percy's daughter to be the one with her heads stuck in the cloud. It just seems so fitting because he needs that aspect in his otherwise straight-lace life... James as the villain is so absolutely fitting and not because I think he's evil but because I can really really see him enjoying the whole I'm going to ruin your lives thing and I get to tie you up and torture you, even just in pretend. So naughty...Also I love that you would cast Albus as the prince... I absolutely love Albus, who is my favorite next gen charrie of all time!!! So, yes, thanks for this lovely little piece. I really enjoyed reading it.

- Carla
House Cup 2015, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Hi Carla!
I loved writing this from Audrey's perspective, because she is totally accepting and supportive of her daughter. She can see who Lucy is really clearly, and encourages her sense of wonder and imagination.
I really had fun imagining how Lucy would cast all of her cousins in one of her plays. Haha.
Thank you so much for the great review!
Cassie :)

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Review #2, by Veritaserum27 Who's to say it isn't real?

20th July 2015:
Hi there Cassie!

House Cup 2015 Review - Ravenclaw

This was so incredibly adorable. I'm just filled to the brim with the sweetness of this story. I loved the light tone you took and I really, really enjoyed it being told through Audrey's eyes. You can tell that this Mum has such an affection for her child and she really sees her daughter for the wonderful being that she is. The part where Lucy lines up all her cousins and assigns roles to them so that they can act out her stories reminds me of my own childhood. My cousins and I would do the very same thing! (Although we tended to make up the stories ourselves - this was a much better idea - haha). I only noticed one small typo. You use the word "thrown" instead of "throne." It only stood out to me because the rest of the story was perfect in terms of grammar and spelling :) Great job on this cute little one-shot - thanks for sharing!

♥ Beth

Author's Response: Hi Beth!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I had a ton of fun with it. Audrey is totally aware and completely accepting of who Lucy is. She encourages her imagination and playfulness, which I loved writing.
My cousins and I did little plays, too! That's where I got the idea to have Lucy do the same thing.
Thank you so much for the review! I'm so happy you liked this story!
Cassie :)

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Review #3, by MileyMalfoy Who's to say it isn't real?

12th July 2014:
I love that this is from Audrey's POV, and that it talks so much about Lucy's wild fantasies. It's really cool to get to hear that at least this magical child enjoys her muggle fairytales as much as any magical ones. I also really enjoyed you talking about how the rest of the family didn't always understand Lucy and her games and stories. I thought it was interesting that the other, older ones like Teddy and Victoire would play along but that Molly had a problem even understanding and refused to play with.

This is a really interesting story, thank you for sharing!
~ Meg
House Cup Review 2014

Author's Response: Hi! Sorry it's taken ages for me to respond to this!
I loved writing this story, and getting inside what I think Audrey's head would be like. I always see stories where Audrey, Molly, and Lucy are all exactly like Percy and the rest of the family thinks they're a bit boring, and I really wanted to do something a bit different with them. Molly is the practical one, but I think she could loosen up if she really wanted to. I always pictured the oldest cousins playing along and saying it's because they were just humoring Lucy, but I think secretly they really enjoy being part of her games.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for the review!
Cassie :)

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Review #4, by Ron 4 Hermione Who's to say it isn't real?

2nd November 2012:
Aww, this was so cute! I loved the idea that even though she must see magic everyday of her life she just want's to live in her own world with her own magic!
The way she can notice things others can't is great and it's also got some truth in it, kids do tend to notice more then others. I can imagine her playing games and dressing up with her cousins, it must have been fun especially since she has a big family.
A really great story and a lovely idea too, great job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had so, so much fun writing this one-shot, so I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! Lucy was a very nostalgic character for me to write, because I was almost exactly like her as a child. Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you had fun reading this!
Cassie :)

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Review #5, by MrsJaydeMalfoy Who's to say it isn't real?

30th September 2012:
Hello there, dear! I'm Jayde, a fellow 'Puff... TAG, you're it! :P

I really, absolutely ADORE this! As you said in your author's note at the beginning, it really did bring out my inner child! I think this was a beautifully-written piece, and a very original idea, too! You're absolutely right, most people wouldn't think that magical children would NEED Fairy Tales, so that made this piece refreshing and cute and sweet and I just want to hug it!

Everything flowed nicely and the spelling and grammar were great, as well as the tone. The only thing I noticed was a tiny little typo at the beginning, in this sentence:

"I think she has more imagination that the rest of the family... " ('That' should be 'than'). That's the only thing I saw, though, and I'm positive that that's just a typo. And it didn't make the sentence hard to read or anything, I just thought I'd let you know! :D

Anyway, GREAT job, dear! I really, really loved this! Well done; 10/10!!

Author's Response: Hello Jayde! First of all, this has nothing to do with your lovely review, but you have a gorgeous name!
Now, onto business! I'm so, so, so immensely glad that you liked this so much! It really was a confidence boost for me! And my goal was reached if you thought back to your childhood while reading this! Lucy is exactly how I was as a child, and it was a really nostalgic piece for me to write. I love that you want to hug this, it would gladly accept your hug!!! :)
I didn't even notice that grammar thing, so I think I will go back and fix it! Thank you for pointing that out!
Wow, 10/10? Really? That's so sweet of you, and I'm glad you think I deserve it! Thank you a million times over for this amazing review!!! And, of course it's wonderful to hear from a fellow Puff!
Cassie :)

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Review #6, by Smattering_of_Fairy_Dust Who's to say it isn't real?

14th August 2012:
Typical Percy. He will understand someday. I can just imagine Lucy pointing at different cousins telling them who they are and how to play their roles. If you every expand this or write Lucy older, please make sure she is into writing and drama.

Great story,

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this and leaving a review! I definitely agree with you about the older Lucy! We'll see if I ever write her... Thanks again!
Cassie :)

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Review #7, by titch95 Who's to say it isn't real?

27th June 2012:
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! How on earth did you come up with it o.O ? The writing was superb as always and I love the fact that Percy's daughter is so imaginitive and 'up in the clouds' as you put it. Molly I imagined like that, sensible and the closeness of all the cousins is so adorable. Amazing as always,
Titch95 x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is based on how I was as a child, so I had tons of fun with it! I loved writing Lucy as being different than how lots of people imagine her!
Cassie :)

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Review #8, by Gabriella Hunter Who's to say it isn't real?

11th June 2012:

Literally, the most adorable amazing thing ever! I have such a vivid picture of Lucy in my mind, with her tiara and robes that its almost too cute! I'm glad that you had her a bit different, even strange considering what she is and it was very enjoyable. She and Lavender would be the best of friends! Alas, my Lucy in my fanfic isn't even at Hogwarts anymore...:) Anyway, I really, really enjoyed this. Nothing wrong with your pacing or grammar and it was very light and easy to follow. Perfection! :D
Now. Calm down but "A Force of Blaise--Wills" is back up on my site! A fresh chapter all for you that even answers some questions! :D
Updates will be slow since my computer died, might take a long time but stay patient!
Much love,

Author's Response: Hey, Gabbie! It's great to hear from you again! Thank you so much for this lovely review!!! I loved writing this because Lucy is solely drawn from how I was as a child. I still have a wild imagination, but now I have many different things as oulets for it (writing is one of them) :) I agree that she and Lav would get along really well! Especially making crowns out of flowers! And, who knows... maybe your Lucy is just my Lucy when she's grown up a little bit... she could still have a great imagination even after she's left Hogwarts! I read A Force of Wills and it was FABULOUS! There is a review from me waiting for you, too! I will keep checking back for updates, even it they're slow, but that's the computer's fault, not yours! I uploaded the next chapter of LMT last night, so hopefully that validates quickly so you can read it! Then comes my Lily/James one-shot! Thank you so much!
Cassie :)

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Review #9, by luvdobby26 Who's to say it isn't real?

9th June 2012:
Hello, so sorry for the lateness but here I am now :)

This was one of the sweetest one-shots ever! Even though it was short, it was still AMAZING! I love how you wrote Audrey and that it was from her POV. It was bril and I just love the whole idea of this story!
Anyway, 10/10! btw, since it's a one-shot, you might want to change it to compleated instead if wip :)

ps, chapter 1 of the story I only wrote because I had a banner on hold in UFG is up if you'd like to have a look :) xx

Author's Response: I didn't mind waiting, it got a few reads so I was fine! I'm glad you enjoyd this one-shot, because it was really close to my heart. I was (and still am) a lot like Lucy, and I have a crazy imagination, so this was really easy and fun for me to write! I did change it to completed, thanks for the reminder! I wrote a bunch of the next chapter of LMT, so I should have that up sometime next week if it gets validated quickly! Thank you so much for all of your support and wonderful reviews! I have no words to thank you enough!!! 10/10
Cassie :)

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