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Reading Reviews for Expecto Patronum
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by meg_harrypotter Expecto Patronum

28th July 2012:
I really enjoyed this, you made it really believable. Well done :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :D

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Review #2, by MeliBeli Expecto Patronum

10th May 2012:
D'aww. That's just cute. :3

Author's Response: Thanks! =)

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Review #3, by gemstone43 Expecto Patronum

9th May 2012:
I really, really, REALLY like this! Stop making one shots and do a story, I want to keep reading :( xx

Author's Response: Oh, stop it you! I'm blushing! I'm gonna do a few more one-shots before starting a bigger story! =)

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Review #4, by apocalypse Expecto Patronum

6th May 2012:
Hey! That's a cute story you wrote out there. Malfoy's patronus being an Eagle totally makes sense and so does Luna's being a rabbit. I liked how it sort of reflects parts of their personalities. =) Luna and Malfoy; quite a different pairing; I don't read that usually. It's good to see you experiment with it! However, the last paragraph was a bit off track than Malfoy's original character. It's just not how he would express his love to anyone; but that's just me! It's a good story overall! Good job with it! =)

~Recenseo '12

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #5, by Timechild Expecto Patronum

4th May 2012:
Interesting one-shot

A little more detail might make this better. Get into the feelings more. Just a suggestion

other than that - nice job

Author's Response: Yeah, I wrote this in a rush. Thank you for your review!

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