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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by kira Lovegood Moonlight, Broomsticks and Friendship

29th April 2012:
Love it! I love Druna! They are soo cute and this OS is even cute:D

Author's Response: I love Druna too! Thank you for your review, glad you liked this!

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Review #2, by DRUUNA Moonlight, Broomsticks and Friendship

22nd April 2012:
Aww, thats so sweet :)
i love Druna :)
Wish it was longer... D:

Author's Response: Thank you! I LOVE Druna as well! I will make my future stories longer if I can.

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Review #3, by LunaLooneyGirll Moonlight, Broomsticks and Friendship

22nd April 2012:
I love it! Great job!
Constructive criticism: Make it longerrr(: Your a great writer!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! You just made my day! The future will bring longer fan fiction stories!

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Review #4, by gemstone43 Moonlight, Broomsticks and Friendship

19th April 2012:
I really like this :) It's really cute! You should defiantly keep writing. You must keep writing, aha :) xx

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like this! I will write more stories once I have some free time again!

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Review #5, by _Keeper_ Moonlight, Broomsticks and Friendship

19th April 2012:
Ohhho! Do I get my nargle? *puppy eyes*
I really like this one-shot. It had a poetic feel to it (I'm a poetry freak) and it flowed very nicely. I love your description in this one shot, Draco is OC but you made him so lovable that I don't notice it. I love the two of them together in your story. (IE it was only 616 words and you left me wanting more!)
The only critic I have is the spacing (it took me FOREVER to figure it out too) to do a single 1.5ish space you have to hit preview then go through and delete all the extra spaces but one. It is a lot of work but I think it is very worth it. Keep them focused on your beautiful writing instead of those annoying spaces =)
Love your story and can't wait to see what you come up with next! Tens all around!

Author's Response: Yes the spaces were quite difficult and I wasn't sure what to do. But I am glad you liked this story! As soon as I get some precious free time I will try to post another story! You just made my day! XD

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