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Review #1, by Daphne Brown Chapter 3- Strangers

14th May 2017:
If you're writing your first story, at least don't make it a novella! Write something shorter!

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Review #2, by YouKnowWho;) Chapter 3- Strangers

10th November 2012:
This is a really interesting story and I am sorry you abandoned it. It was an odd coincidence that I had to rewrite an ending for the Lord of the Flies for English and I read this with the Beasts.. I would go back however later on and edit- Annie's name switched... But that is all I can comment on because everything is written as a first person diolauge and the speach should stay true to the character's grammer... As I always encourage- keep writing!
XOXOXOXOXOX,
LLG

Author's Response: I might come back to it but I don't think I will. But thanks for the review! :)

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