2011-09-27 21:03:27
peep peep

Sugary? Marshmallowy? Pink? That's right, it's me! A Peep! So I'm totes bored in this microwave right now, like whatever. And I needed something to entertain me, so like, this story works. Every Peep goes for TSwift song fics.

Ginny and Harry are a very dynamic couple, y'know? I mean, I just love their love. It gives me the softest, fluffiest feelings down in my gooey marshmallow heart, and I just can't even. Amirite?? Anyway, srsly, I'm melting cuz this is just too darn cute. (Or maybe that's the heat from the microwave? Smh, too hard to tell.)

Ginny is still so shy around Harry, even though it's been a little while and they've had their first kiss and everything. Awww, so cute! She's still her own person, though, and while she lets Harry go off and take on the world, she's fighting her own battles on the Quidditch pitch. If Harry is Superman, Ginny is Superwoman. Oh yeah.

You really did a great job of embellishing and adding to their story. I can totes feel my heart melting, my sugary coating rolling down my back to puddle around my bubbling marshmallow tummy...


HOLD THE PHONE. I think I'm actually melting. Like, literally. No, why?! Ugh, I can't even.

Sorry to run, but you've got a fluffy, wonderful story here. It's as fluffy as the marshmallowy blob I'm becoming...

♥Microwaved Marshmallow Peep

*violent, muffled explosions*

Author's Response: o.O Hello there Marshmallow Peep...

Ginny is most definitely Superwoman. Ginny is awesome. Go Ginny! I'm glad you liked the story! I'm sorry it made you melt...but you really shouldn't be hanging around in microwaves.

Thank you so much!

*cleans sticky marshmallow goo from story*
2011-09-27 21:03:27
Aw, this is so sweet and cute! Yes, it has its sad, heartbreaking moments, but overall it just has such a happy, loving, fluffy feel to it and I love it! (When my identity is revealed, remind me to come back and favorite this!) ♥

Okay, I'm just going to say it - that's the night Harry's going to propose, isn't it? Isn't it?!?! I'm calling it! :P

I loved reading all of Ginny's thoughts at various times throughout the series, and I really, really loved hearing how she fell in love with Harry, even before she met him. I'm sure other little girls would have fantasized about marrying Harry, after hearing their parents talk about him so much, but hearing that coming from Ginny is almost like Divination. :P

Although Ron, Molly, and Arthur didn't really make an 'appearance' here and were only mentioned, you still gave some insight into their personalities here, and I think that's amazing - your choice of words is so powerful that, with only a few words, you teach us about them. For example, by saying that Molly kept insisting that Harry was 'just a boy', you really showed her strong maternal instincts - fantastic!

I haven't heard the song before, but I think it fits PERFECTLY with the story, really. It even fits with the parts about Ginny not having told him she loves him, and her fear of him finding someone else - EVERYTHING!

This was really enjoyable, dear! Really well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Haha, maybe it is :) You never really know with Harry!

I was always glad that Ginny ended up with Harry. They're one of my all-time favorite couples!

I'm glad you liked this! I really liked this song, and the first time I heard it I immediately thought of Harry and Ginny. Glad you liked it !

2011-09-27 21:03:27
Hello again and happy holiday!

I didn't know this song before. I like Taylor Swift enough just not enough to actually know all of her songs so when I saw this piece, I searched the Internet and put the song on while I was reading.

My first thought? Thank you for making me discover this song! It's so beautiful and you really captured the essence of the song in this piece. It was so fitting for Ginny and Harry's relationship.

I like how you created Ginny as less of a fiery woman and more of a passionate one. Mostly though, I have to give you major kudos on your characterization of Luna. She was simply perfect. You managed to have her mature and grow up into an adult all the while keeping her dreamy ways alive. I really loved that characterization and she was definitly a nice addition to this love story.

This piece flowed nicely and you did a great job incorporationg the song through the story, each complementing the other. Great work and thanks again!!!

Author's Response: Well I'm glad I introduced you to the song. I can't hear this song without thinking of Harry and Ginny, so I finally just decided to write this. Thank you so much!

2011-09-27 21:03:27
Great song choice Hun, Taylor Swift is my idol. ;)
I love how you made Ginny a bit of a hopeless romantic, now that I think about it I guess that it suits her.
I think you captured this well, Luna especially. You made her still like Luna from the books but she seems more mature. I guess it was the war, right?
Now that I think about it this song is a great Harry and Ginny one. :)
Great job! 10/10

Jessy : )

Author's Response: Aww, thank you :)

Yeah, whenever I hear this song, they instantly come to mind :)




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