Honestly, I stick with what I initially said, I love it. The one thing I would have done is kept your original chapter and ended it with "Everything went black" and then had the rest come in the next part. It would have kept everyone hanging, except me that is when you give me the "summery" for the next part. LOl. Redvine? :) ~Sarah
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks! I'll change it back once I start posting my other-side part of the story! :)
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