The raw, unedited nature of your story is what makes it beautiful. I've been reading/writing stories for 7 years and this story is in my top 5.
Author's Response: Oh my, thank you so incredibly much for this review (here I was thinking the unedited-ness made me lazy), it really inspires me. It is such an honor to have a story of mine be in someone's top five, this is one of the highest compliments I have ever received. Thank you, again.
Gorgeous and raw, it was a beautiful and well-written songfic. I loved how you portrayed Rose and the background of her family. I appreciate a good songfic that captures the emotions of a song rather than trying to make it fit the lyrics. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is a truly, truly touching review and lets me know that I'm doing what I'm trying to accomplish. Thank you again!
I think this one shot was different from the others I've read here on hpff.
It was like I really could feel Rose's feelings and as the mirror shattered into pieces I was all like "NOOO!!!"" - which is not what I normally do :D
My neighbors must think I'm a lunatic, well, they think that anyways... still.^^
So: I really liked it and am hoping to hear more from you soon!
Author's Response: great! I'm really glad you could feel what Rose was feeling, that was one of my main goals for the piece. I'm also glad you thought it was different, I intended it to be quite different. Thank you so much for your very kind review!!