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EEK! I just love this couple plz write more of them!

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:) Aaaw thanks so much! ^_^ If i ever have time to start writing again, I will remember what you said and possible work on another one shot of these two! haha thank you so much

Aw, this was cute! I loved the whole Hugo being protective of Lily, I thought it worked very well! 10/10 :) xxx

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Thanks so much! :3 Its always lovely to get great reviews like this when having an off day. Thank you so much for brightening my day!

AWW! I love this, it was the perfect use of the picture. I'm really glad you had Lily and Lysander together; I've seen a lot of different next gen pairings for Lily, but so far Lily and Lysander is one of my favorites (:

And I adore the idea of Hugo and Lily being best friends with their own special spot. It's nice that they have such a wonderful relationship. I thought it was cool that you had Hugo and Lysander be best friends too, which is something I don't normally see. Also, your use of description was wonderful, I felt like I could see the old church in my head. 

Plus your use of emotions was very real, I could feel her pain and confusion over the wedding. You made her worries about ruining his dreams very believable, nice job!

Thanks for entering my challenge!

-Ronsgirl29

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:) thanks for the lovely review! :) This was VERY far off my usual writing and i was really worried OOH i ADORE lily/lysander its just the only next gen ship i can see her with! :) LOL anyways thanks again for the lovely review first time i saw the picture it was all i could see :) lol it was a great challenge and got me a great piece from it thanks for hosting it! :)

Aww! I loved it and i am SO glad she went back to him! i think lily/a scamander is the most canon ship, i havnt given it much thought though. yay for hugo (watermelon) for saving the day! i liked the proposal, her friendship with hugo but most of all, when she was reunited with lysander... wow! so cute :)

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hehe thanks! :) I love hugo and i remembered reading that since they were so close in age it was predicted that they would be REALLY close in age! :) So i was like OMG no way brilliant!! :) hehe thanks for the lovely review! :) Im glad you liked it!!! *hugs*

XxJess

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