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loved this story. well written and you captured Ron and Hermione perfectly.  everything was so in their nature.  Kudos!!

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That was really sweet! Well Done!

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Very very very cute. I wonde how Harry will react!

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Great story! It's so cute and fluffy, I loved it even though I don't think that they were getting together behind Harry's back.

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 i have read alot of stories but not as good as this one trust me i do not lie and when i tell you this trust me , i think your family might have a J.K. Rowling in their hands

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Ahhhhhhhhhh! How sweet, it actually fits! You never know it could of happened! LOL

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Oh that was a FANTASTIC and proper ending!!! I'm so happy that I came back to this!!!! You should keep up writing!!!!! ~Tabby the Kat

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Oh, so cool!!!! I read the first couple of chapters on another penname, but I had to delete it and I just sort of forgot about this, But I'm SO glad that one of my friends reminded me about it!!!! Its REALLY good. Hey do you think that you could R/R my stories? ~Tabby the Kat

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Aww, so sweet! I loved it! *Goes off to read more of your stories*I love all your R/Hr stories, keep 'em up!

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i'm just in awe..that was really, really good!! amazing...simply amazing...

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i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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okay, this was really quite good. characters in keeping with book, not acting out of character...good story. Very clever.

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Oh my gosh I absolutely loved the cute story! It was just so wonderful! You are simply a brilliant writer with loads of talent!

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This was a wonderful story!!!!  Very creative structure and well written!!!!  Great job!!!

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I loved it!  U should definetly (did I spell that right?) write a sepquel!  I think that u should have Harry and Ginny get together.  And I think that Hermione should get pregant.  And then have the two couples married!  Then write an epilouge where the foar are like in their late 20's and their married and have kids!  I know I can't control what u write, I mean it is your story!  But I think it would be a good idea.  So pleeeez consider my ideas!

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I love it!  I can't wait to read more!

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Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! u must update....or eles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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When will the next cppie be posted

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I would like to congratulate you for not making me gag. Most stories make me want to cry because of how much they ruin the books but this one was pretty good.

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What a cute story! I enjoyed reading this, and I believe that you did a excellent job! hehe, I can't believe how good this turned out to be, I saw this in someone's fav's and decided to take a look at it since it looked so good! And you described that characters very well! I would give you a ten if we were still doing the rating things, but since it's not there anymore I'll give you a 100! hehe

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very nicely done!  I like how you eased them into the relationship.  This is how it really would be with them.  Too many fanfics have them regular one day and shouting I love you the next without any in between.  It would definately be a gradual dawning of feelings for them.  You also didnt add too many out of this world extras that are unbelievable.  Ive read other works of yours and you are talented and stay true to the Ron and Hermione that JK Rowling has created.  Well done!!

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I thought this was a great story.  The events were perfect but instead of having them occur at one time you drew them out by having a charcator pick out key points.  I thought it was smashing good.  Great job!

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Very nice and sweet story... I am not a Ron/Hermione shipper, but, I must say that your story is very well written...

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really realistic, like you said, you really stick with characters. Thank you again, I had a lot of fun reading them. IS there any new story coming from you soon?

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I thank that your story was very interesting and I believe that it really happened I really like the way you put it together because the story was told by ron I like that

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