2010-08-17 17:05:29
aww
that was so cute
i loved it
=]

Author's Response: Thank you :)
2010-08-17 17:05:29
aww that was so good! and really funny and sweet as well, well done :)

Author's Response: Always happy to make somebody smile :)
2010-08-17 17:05:29
hahaha that's great! I definitely was not expecting that ending! I love how poor Bill is coping (well, not coping) in Fleur's absence. I especially liked your interpretation of Ron, and how closely he guards Rose... although I don't blame him for casting all those protective spells. After all, he is allowed to be a little paranoid after the whole Voldemort thing and all. Good job on this story! It made me laugh, which was what I was after!

Author's Response: Babies who learns new words like to use them as much as possible, and having a young wizard in the house has to lead to some unexpected results.

As for Ron, he really is entitled to worry a bit (or a lot)

Thanks for the kind words, the idea made me laugh, nice to hear it made somebody else laugh as well.
2010-08-17 17:05:29
Aside from the sometimes distracting spelling mistakes, this was very cute. I think it would be worth getting a beta in order to correct it because, like I said, it's distracting at times and there are words mispelled that become other words that have a whole other meaning (ex: in the letter from Molly, you talk about the most recent events... but writting reSent...).

I was good anyway, cute, fluffy and blue!

Author's Response: Thanks. I know my spelling could be better and will try to get it fixed.
2010-08-17 17:05:29
So cute ! :) I really liked it !

Author's Response: Thank you:)

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