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I don't know what happened with you and this website but I just wanted to let you know I absolutely adore your story... and I have spent about a week looking for it on any other fanfiction site... I even signed up for a website that had only mentioned it... I know you probably won't even get this... but I wish you would consider not posting it on here if you don't wish to, but posting it on another... because I know I would love to read it. My personal favorite was the scene that James had Sirius and Kiley (I'm sorry if that is wrong I am truly a fan... but with reading so many fanfictions they all blend together) shape hearts out of clay after their fight and he broke them, and they had to talk about their feelings about each other and i literally cried. Like a baby. And how all of the men in the Quidditch tournament treated her with the feathers and such.. anyway I don't really know why im writing this... whether its to attempt to convince you to put it on another site or what... I just miss reading the story.

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SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL. Please?

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SEQUEL! SEQUEL!SEQUEL!

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Definitely go with the sequel! (:

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Go for the sequel. This is by far the best fan fix I have read on here. Milk it all you want

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This story definitely deserves a sequel. It is fantastic!

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Hi :D I've been with this story from the start :) Its beautiful! I lové thé characters,thé setting,thé plot... Really I lové it! Thé only thing is that its very dramatic at Times but its more of a good than a bad thing really :) So I'm definately a taker on thé sequel!! 
Take your Time and dont feel rushed, just know that I'm going to start showing withdrawal signe soon :) No seriously take it slow so as to make it as awesome as this one (if you end up making one) 
Love, 
li

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If you end this story in 2 chapters, I really will cry.  Seriously, there will be tears and screaming, and my entire dorm will know how upset I am!  Even the THOUGHT of it is depressing!  I pretty much want both Kylie and Sirius to live forever.  Actually, I want to be IN the story, but that's less of a possibility...  Again, fabulous chapter.  Gave me the chills.  Twice.  :)

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Thanks for the review!
Uh-oh, the whole dorm? So maybe I will have to write a sequel so they don't hear your shrieks... I have what I want to happen all planned out, so hopefully all will end well! Thanks, and I'm glad that you liked it!

I'm sad it's almost over, but thank you for writing this awesome story. Personally, I'm not ready for it to be over yet, either. Why don't you leave it open for a sequel (by which I mean please don't kill Kylie yet if that's the other option), and if you eventually decide you don't want to write it then no harm no foul, but if you do decide to carry on you won't have to deus ex machina an explanation. lol

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Thanks for the review!
I'm glad that you've liked it, and stuck by it for all of this time. I actually have decided to do just that, which is really convienient for an author haha! So, yes, very good suggestion!

I've been so behind and oh my actual god this chapter was beautiful. I cried a little bit. Good job :) I have loved your story so much and I can't believe it's coming to an end! Hmmm, I would definitely read your sequel if you decided to write it because I love LOVE your characters and your writing but I sort of feel like this is a one off amazing thing, you know? Whatever you decide to do I'm sure it'll be fantastic! Ahh you're brilliant. Can't wait for the ending (even though I don't want it to be over!) xx

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Thanks for the review!
Haha, it has been a while, hasn't it? I wasn't trying to make you cry, really! But I'm glad that you liked it anyways. I have decided what I wanted to do, thankfully, which is a sequel that isn't required - I'm closing this story in a way that will hopefully satisfy people, but leaving just enough wiggle room that I can continue if I want. Hopefully I'll be able to post the next chapter soon!

I love this story so far!!! You've done a great job!! Can't wait to read on :)

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Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're liking it!

I honestly think you should just end it. As much as I love this story, I feel like sequels always kind of ruin a perfect ending. Though I'm sure yours would be good. So, yah. By the way, this chapter made me cry:'(

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Thanks for the review!
I do see your point, but I do believe I have come up with a solution that will satisfy everyone - hopefuly, anyway. I'm glad that you liked it, though I'm sad you cried!

I honestly think you should just end it. As much as I love this story, I feel like sequels always kind of ruin a perfect ending. Though I'm sure yours would be good. So, yah. By the way, this chapter made me cry:'(

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Thanks for the review!
I do see your point, but I do believe I have come up with a solution that will satisfy everyone - hopefuly, anyway. I'm glad that you liked it, though I'm sad you cried!

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL

please?

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Thanks for the review!
Hehe, enthusiasm, eh?

I really enjoy this story! You've done a great job so far! I loved that you joined the Slytherins in there.. it's cool to see some unity! I haven't read a story that has done that and I'm excited to see where it goes!
Great job!

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Thanks for the review!
I'm glad that you're liking it so far! I couldn't have a team without Slytherins included - I mean, they aren't ALL bad... really... Thank you!

I loved this chapter! It was so sweet and had a kind of simple beauty to it that I greatly admire. An interesting end to the tournament- I wasn't expecting it, but that's the charm of it. 

Definitely a sequel!!

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Thanks for the review!
I figured that I couldn't stray too far from the actual books by having them WIN the tournament or anything, especially because J.K. herself never mentioned anything about it, so therefore it really can't exist, and... Death Eaters just seemed like the way to do it. I think that I've finally figured out what I'm doing about the sequel, and I'll make the official anouncement about it later on - but if you really want to know, it's probably in the responce to a different review. I just don't really want to type it all out again!

I love your story and definitely want a sequel! 
PLEASE!?!?!?!

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Thanks for the review!
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it, and I'll do my best!

I love this story. I think, personally, that you should end it when they finish school and then do a sequal of Sirius and Kylie living together afterwards!
Also, do they end up continuing the competition? Or does it finish there? 

I love this story so much but i don't want it to finish soon D:

10/10!

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Thanks for the review!
As much as it I would love to do it like that, I feel like that WOULD be milking it... but don't worry, I do believe that I've come up with the perfect solution to the sequel problem... but I'll talk about it in depth later. The competition is over with now, because everyone agreed that they didn't want to do it much longer. 
I'm glad that you've enjoyed it for so long!

whyy is this story over?? 
here is a little story about how much i like this story. it's short: today, at noon, i got my pottermore acceptance email. i have not opened it because i wanted to finish this story first. it is now 1130 at night. it is still unopened.
the end.
you're brilliant, as my other reviews have said. i can' t really offer an opinion on what i think you should do because i know you'll make the decision that's best. if you write a sequel, i will read it for sure. if you dont, i'll respect that.
this is one of my all time favorite stories, and with how long i've been on here and how many stories i've read, that's saying something.
update asap! :D

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Thanks for the review!
Ooooh, I like stories!!! Haha, my friend has been dying to get her pottermore email and hasn't gotten it yet, so I will admit that I'm pretty pleased that my story ranks higher than that... it's a serious complement!
I'm glad that you have so much faith in me and my decision-making abilities! I'm glad that you like it so much, and I'll do my best not to disapoint you in the future!

fjashgsld;gfjsakl;ghsdlfj
^my mind right now.

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Thanks for the review!
Does that mean that your mind has been blown?

THIS WAS SO CUTE. AHFDSLK;GHASDKLFJ. I JUST DIED AGAIN. JESUS. 
i love jaz's proclamation at the end there.
i also have to commend you on how fluid your characters are. idk if you get what i mean, but they're so in-character and unchanging, but developing. and they do things that most authors wouldn't include. like touching their faces or resting their chin on their palm. it's things like that that really bring a story to life and yours is like a freaking living, breathing, human. you're brilliant. 
i'm jealous.
the end.
p.s. yes. i am fangirlling.

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Thanks for the review!
Maybe instead of SAYING Jesus, you should rename yourself... people don't often die so much and come back to life!
Jaz is a pretty unique character, isn't she?
Hehe, I kind of understand... at least, I think so, anyway. I try to keep my people as realistic as possible - I mean, we spend every waking hour of our lives with real humans, so to have people who were suddenly static and unrealistic would be kind of a slap in the face for all of us, you know? We deserve to have reality in everything that we do, not excluding in writing. 
There's no reason to be jealous at all, my dear!
P.S. sometimes, I am too :D

Amazing chapter as always and even if th MMOMB forever sounds great I don't want it to end, I am so addicted to this story:) I check almost everyday if there is a new chapter:) So of course I am up for the one with the sequel:)

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Thanks for the review!
I'm glad that you liked it! I think I've come up with a solution to the problem, which I will discuss in length very soon... whenever the next chapter gets posted, that is!

BLAAAHHH I AM DEAD FROM THE PERFECTNESS THAT IS THIS CHAPTER. I DIED. I AM PERISHED.
WAIT.
WHAT'S THIS?
AM I COMING BACK TO LIFE?
THERE ARE STILL 12 MORE CHAPTERS?
DEAR GOD I THINK I'M IN HEAVEN!

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Thanks for the review!
All caps lock! That counts as a win!
NO!!! DON'T DIE!
Wait, life again? Okay, I can live with that! Huzzah, you have not yet passed into the netherworld!
Though heaven might be a bit of an overstatement... albiet a flattering one :D

So sorry I haven't been to review for ages, but I must say IT CAN'T END! A sequel does sound pretty good, with a focus on a different pairing? But still a letle but of Kylie/sirius of course:)
What ever you do, I'm sure it'll be amazing. 
And btw, this chapter(and every single one before it) was bloody fantastic. That is all. 
X

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Thanks for the review!
Haha, it's okay, all is forgiven! I believe I've come up with a solution to the sequel problem, and I'll talk about it later in a chapter that I post... whenever it pops up. 
I'm glad that you liked it!

ajfsdlk;ghaskj okay. so i really really really dont want to go to bed especially not after that awesome chapter filled with kylie/sirius goodness, but i have to be up in way too few hours, so i probably should.
i can't believe i never read this sooner. it's brilliant. really well written. i'm kind of in aw. the hospital wing scene last chapter made my heart ache. in a good way. i love it all. so much. you're brillant. i shall be back tomorrow to continue my quest of absorbing this story with much gusto. :D

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Thanks for the review!
Yes, yes, you need sleep, because tired readers mean unhappy readers, and no one wants that!
Aw, well, it's not your fault that you didn't find it sooner! I'm glad that you're liking it so much. I've done my best to make it poignant and realistic, so hopefully that was able to come across. I cannot wait for you to continue your journey!

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