Nice story so far. I will defenitely add this to my favourites list!
He was always, just, there.
=> Nice! I always have the same too. When I meet someone for the first time, I just keep seeing that person around. I think it is just great how you mananged to put flints of reality in the story.
The only thing I can just say is that you should update soon!
Author's Response: thanks! good to hear some kind of response, it's school time and i don't have a lot of spare time to write for pleasure ... especially as fanfiction wouldn't really be at the top of the list of my priorities to write. but thank you, i'll try my best to update :)
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