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I finally found a well written Draco/Ginny story... too bad it was this short :)

7/10

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OH. MY. GOD.
I really wish I could find the words to express how much I love this! But there are none, unfortunately. I really liked it, though I'm more of a "D/G forever and ever happy" shipper ... But this ... wow, just wow! I'd love you forever (and I'd most certainly review every chapter!) if you would write a sequel to it, but not a one shot again, maybe a 5-10 chapter story ... Just saying x)
Keep up the fantastic work! 10/10

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nice plot idea and well written... love it...

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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! 

Lovely Slytheriness

:0 Wow. Very powerful.

Mind you, I will admit this was amazing. Still, I love Draco! I don't like Draco's characterization in this story, but that is kind of the point, isn't it. Yes, tis. And your characterization is awesomely written and perfectly valid, so there I have it.

What's amazing about this piece is that I can very much believe that Ginny would do something this desperate. As the author you make me understand what went through Ginny in a very real, emotionally intense way.

BRILLIANT. 10/10!

Cheers-
Hallows

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Yay! You don't like Draco here! :) Yes, that is what I was going for so I'm very pleased indeed to hear that you didn't like him. Sneaky git. 

Furthermore, I'm very happy that you find my Ginny somewhat believable. I, too, believe that she could do something this desperate. 

Thank you for another lovely interview dear! 

-Lovely_Slytheriness

Really good! A little disjointed I would have liked more development and perhaps a happy ending though I know nit all stories have them !

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Thanks for reviewing =)

Lovely_Slytheriness

Oh, darn. I'd written out a nice, long, detailed review for you, then my computer decided to restart itself without my permisson before I could finish and post it. But I'll try to duplicate it.

I thought you wrote one of the few either Hermione-or-Ginny/Dracos that had a realistic cause for them falling for each other and didn't forget about Ron, Harry, or whoever else was "in the picture". Take a moment to pat yourself on the back, because it's so rare to find a legitimately realistic H-or-G/Draco!

The story covered a longer time frame than most one shots do, and did it relatively quickly. I think you might consider slowing it down, adding more detail, perhaps show more of Harry in the fic.

I have to mention, however, that Ginny normally wouldn't lower herself to someone like Draco just to get Harry. I think she has more self confidence and pride than that. I'm not suggesting you change that, because otherwise the story would fall apart, but maybe show how obviously Harry avoided a close relationship with her, and maybe that would convince the reader a little more.

Overall, nice work, it was really nice to see a really cause for a Ginny/Draco!

~lllb

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I hate when that happens! It happened to me last week, after I'd typed out a good 2000 word for one of my WIP's. Gah. I was not impressed. Anyway, I'm happy your review finally got through =)

First off, thank you so much for this sincere review. I truly appreciate it. I'm so happy that you liked the situation I got Draco and Ginny into here, it means a lot. *pats self on back* 

And yes, I know that this is a little bit rushed and the characterization isn't flawless. I had a pretty hard time writing this. Me and my friend challenged each other - she gave me Draco/Ginny One Shot, Hogwarts era just out of spite I think, lol. She knows I have quite a few issues with canon!Ginny, and she knows that I love Draco so she wanted to see how I'd work that ship. 

I agree with your final paragraph here; Ginny probably wouldn't do this. The only reason to why she might consider doing something this drastic would probably be because of her obsession with Harry (I refuse to call it 'love', to me she will always just be obsessed!) and that's why I chose this approach. 

I know I'm rambling, do forgive me. Once again, thank you so much for leaving me a review, and I hope that you generally enjoyed the read. 

Lovey_Slytheriness

:O

wow! that was good! and you really did make Draco mean to Ginny... not that I'm really surprised. 
You make it really easy to visualise. I love that in stories. :) 

Mine is an embarassment next to yours. I will have to make my next challenge less porn and more plot.

x

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Thank you emma!!! *huggles* I'm pleased you liked it. It was a tough challenge *glares* but it was actually a true joy to write :)

And pft. You're being ridiculous. Yours was amazing.

xxx Linnea

Omg!! 
This is a totally unique pairing, which I have NEVER seen done before...wow! 

A a missing word here "her resort to" - missing a "to" between 'her' and 'resort'. 

-gawks at screen- I am still completely and utterly confused on how you got this to work, stupid Ginny! Why would you be so stupid enough to go to Malfoy, I want to slap her. 

You wrote the characters wonderfully, even in this weird situation that they got the two of themselves into.

I have a little tip, you don't have to take it, but when the Unbreakable Vow comes into play in the story, you could have a sentence about the time the twins tried to get Ron to make one with them,how it was only the time Arthur was angrier than his wife and that Fred's left buttocks had never been the same. [don't know how I remembered that]

Just one last thing, wouldn't the Weasleys literally tear the limbs off of Draco if he touched their little sister? I mean it's just complete hatred between the two families.

Other than that I really really liked this fic, it's totally different than what I've read before and you did a awesome job with the characters.

Well done!!

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What an outstanding review, thank you so much!

I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed it. I'm pleased to hear that you liked the characterizations, that's very important to me. 

That's a very clever idea. I might just actually add that in there - and lol, I remembered that too for some reason!

And yes, they probably would tear her apart, but in this One Shot I sort of had to be selective on what to focus upon or else it would have been all over the place. 

Thank you again my sweet for such a lovely review!

Love, 
Linnea

this part doesn't make sense to me..."What could you possible offer me? Money?" He laughed at this. "I don't whore, Weasley. And even if I did you couldn't afford it." its just the part where he calls her a whore it doesn't seem like the sentence was finished or is missing words. but other then that this was a great one shot for ginny/draco i liked how you kept draco in character. it was great. keep up the good work.

~Slytherinchica08~

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The part that you pointed out, Draco is not actually calling Ginny a whore. He's using the word as a verb, to describe something he doesn't do. ^_^

I'm happy you liked it otherwise, thanks for the review!

Lovely_Slytheriness

That's hauntingly sad, it almost made me cry.  But it really illustrates the saying be careful what you wish for you might just get it.

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Thank you! I'm glad the message went through, lol. 

- LS

you. are. amazing. 
that is all.

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haha, thank you m'dear =)

- LS

Wow. That was amazing.

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Yay! i'm happy you enjoyed it ^_^

Oh, very dark and twisted but I liked it.  Poor Ginny though.

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Thank you for the review :)

Wowza. That was pretty intense. In a good way. In a very good way. It was well written, and I liked seeing Ginny behave differently than she normally does. Great job.
10/10

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Thank you! I'm glad you like my portrayal of her here, I never usually write Ginny. I'm happy you enjoyed the read. 

- Lovely_Slytheriness

So, was that amazing? Uh, duh! Did I just ask myself a question. Uh, yeah, you crazy! Ok, I'll stop. :) I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!

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Thank you my dear! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^

-Lovely_Slytheriness

this was really good (:

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Thank you!

Lovely_Slytheriness

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