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Story: If we were anywhere els in the world.

So far I'm really liking the story, and I really like the fact that there are 2 new girls, so as to not know exactly where it's going.  The only advice I'll give is to lengthen your chapters.  Try for at least 1500 words if not more around 2000-3000.

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I love it keep going.

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