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Great story! update soon!

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Aah... You haven't updated in forever!

Hurry up, please- this is quite nice :P

Happy new year to you!

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I'm sorry! Life has been pretty crazy, I'm working on an update now, I swear. :] Thanks very much for the review, I'm glad you liked it. And a Happy New Year to you too!

oohh...i love it!
the twin thing between Callie and Spencer is so cool. and you did a really good job of introducing the charcters. you weren't too descriptive, but you still gave a good sense of the characters
and wow! oliver's her best friend? i really wasn't expecting that. but i think that's the best part of this story 
:DD

10/10

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the way I introduced the characters, and that Oliver turned out to be Calliope's best friend. :] It's good to know that it came across alright. Thanks so much for reviewing!

I liked it! This story is promising. I like Calliope! She's really believable.

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you like Calliope, I worked pretty hard to make her seem realistic. :] Thanks so much for reviewing!

Hehe. I liked this chappie. 'Tis cute.
These are my comments on the characters...
~Oliver - THE SWEETEST EVER! Awww, so cute with Calliope.
~Viola - Funny, but kind of strange and annoying [in my opinion].
~Rolo and Miri - So sweet and cute, Rolo especially. ;]
~Percy - Still the old prat he always was. xP

Oh, I loved how you made this in Harry's third year. Since I am feeling extra slow tonight, at first when I read about the dementors on the train I thought 'But that sounds too similar to POA... of wait, it is the year of POA!!' Haha. I  am so tired right now.

Aaahh, I was going to quote some of my faves, but I am WAAAYYY too tired now. So sorry, I swear I'll make it up to you in the next chapter review!

Thankies! So long and goodnight,,

~II.

Ohh yesshh!! And LOVELY Chapter image!! Absolutely STUNNING, m'dear. xx Gorgeous Ollie.

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Haha, don't even worry about, you are still the best reviewer on the planet. I posted this while I was half asleep, so I most likely made more than a few mistakes. I decided not to go AU with this one, so I'm glad you like that so far.

I'm really glad you like the characters. I agree, Viola is a little annoying, but she has her good moments, I swear. And Yay for Rolo and Miri! I'm so glad you like the two of them. And of course, I'm tickled you like the way I write Oliver. :]

The chapter image was made by my pal, .showmethelove, over at TDA, so all credit to her on that. But James Franco is beautiful, isn't he? xD

Thanks so much for reviewing!

you accidentally wrote that Lupin was the new transfiguration teacher.  Just thought I should let you know.

And, as you admitted, this chapter was a bit slow, but I did fill us readers in on some character details.  It was an effective and concise recapitulation of her past 6 years.  Can't wait for the next chp to come out!

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Crepes, I can't believe I did that! Thanks for pointing it out, I will be changing that asap. I do promise a faster next chapter. :] Thank you so much for reviewing!

I liked this chapter as well. You defined the character relationships more, I like that. Also you totally tell the kind of relationships the friends have with each other. I like this chapter too, so update as soon as you can, I look forward to it. Also good luck on the job!

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Aww, thank you. :] I'm glad you liked this chapter, and the way the characters interact with each other. Thanks for reviewing!

Really nice start! I love the characters!

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Thank you very much for the review, I'm glad you like the characters. :]]

N'aww. That was really sweet.
I'm uber excited about the next one!
Also, when I heard that Thalia was best friends with the Weasleys, I thought what an awesome story that would be, focusing on their adventures. =]

Seriously, I love all your work.

~Indiee

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Wow, thank you! I'm glad you like my writing, I'm quite tickled you've checked out my author page. xD And I have good news for you! I actually want to write a spin-off of this, focusing on Thalia and the twins, once I finish this. xD Thanks so much for reviewing!

I think it was jolly good, lol. So I like how you dont know who her best friend is, until the end of the chapter. And then how every one makes fun of every one else. But figures I would find some thing like that amusing.

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I'm glad you liked this chapter, Beka. I kind of wanted to leave a lot of questioning around the Oliver thing till the end. Thanks for reviewing!

i like it so far.

please update soon.

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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to update as soon as I can. :]

cant wait for more so update soon

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Yay, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try and update as soon as I can, thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!

What a spiffy start! I already love the family dynamics, and your characters are nice and easy to like...It had a good, smooth flow too, casual narration that really suited.

Can't wait to read more  =)
-Rose.

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Wow, thank you, I love when I can do things spiffy-like, so thank you for letting me know. Also, I'm glad you liked the characters, and the big family theme. It's always good to know I did well with the flow, so thanks for that too. :] I'll update as soon as I can, thanks for the review!

I liked this chapter! Already I like the whole big family unit thing. It's really good so far! Keep it up and post soon!

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Haha, thank you so much for reviewing! I love big families, so I'm glad you liked it too. :]] I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks again!

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