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you should have left it at 'i love not being the one in trouble'

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I think this little sequal was awesome. :)

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Bahaha Lily is hilariosity personified! I wish I was her cos she is soo funny :) Plus she has has Jake! Yay, this was immensely funny, thanks!

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The ending isn't great but I LOVE this one-shot all the same. Lily is awesome and so is her vocabulary! This was so funny I can't choose my favourite bit...Gah.

OK...I've decided! It was this: 'I guess it proved to him that he was still Jacob and not some psycho who had stolen his body and was now determined to date me for sadistic reasons unbeknownst to everyone.'

XD Hilarious. This whole story is hilarious and I love Lily's train of thought. I'm always so happy after reading your stories :)

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OMG!! i LOVED IT!! this is one of the many stories of yours that i keep comming back to because its so AMAZING!! i LOVE it!! it will always be a story that i turn to when i am have an horrible day!! thank you for making my day to day and many more to come!! You are an AMAZING fan fiction author!! dont stop writing!!

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great story, i really enjoyed it.
just a quick questions, is the wood family Oliver's, Harry's ex-captain, family?
thanks and congratulations.
James2009

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Hey that was absolutely great!! Though yeah the ending was a little abrupt =( but still the fic rocked!!

Um yeah, I have a small request.maybe u cud fulfill it?? Can u write a fic (one--shot will do) describing jacob and lily's...er...physical attractions *winks*.hope u get what i mean.i wud love to read it...and yeah rate it "mature"...*winks*.please reply and tell me if u can write that. I wud love it. and no probs if u dont feeel comfortable writing it or if u dont want to write. it was just a suggestion and request as i want to read it!!

thanks!!

u rock as always!!

10/10

cheers!
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Ahahaha, you want one of those? *waggles eyebrows* Well, I don't know. I will have to think about it, but it might happen. Though I'm really a bad person, I do sometimes get my Sunday School teacher's voice in the back of my head telling me that God knows all I do. It's a paranoia issue.

Aww I wish you'd take this farther. I've read like every one of these stories

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I might; you never know. Thanks for the review. :D

Your stories are amazing, laugh out loud great! Love the reaction at the end of this :D

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Haha, thanks so much! :)

This was great!! I've loved all of your Jake/Lily stories since stargazing,which was by the way was FANTASTALISTIC (yes, i know thats not a word!! hehe) Anyway, it was really good! im giving it 10/10! you're a great writer!

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Haha, I say it can be a word for today. :) Thanks so much for the great review!

Well you know i love Jacob, but have you thought of wrting a
Lilly/Scorpius fic? Pleeassee??

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Haha, I'm not a big Lily/Scorpius fan. I did write one, though, "Someone Spiked the Pumpkin Juice".

That was really good! I loved it...the change was very smooth and not at all awkward! Good Job!
~emmapotter

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Thank you so much! :)

Hehehe! I love it! Lily and Jacob are awesome ;]
10/10 xx

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Haha, thank you for the review!

This was a good story i liked it

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Thanks! :)

No, no, the ending is great!  Nice and sweet.  And as a whole, your humour continues to shine through.  Also, you really gave Ginny her own distinct voice, so kudos for that.  Quite sweet and quite funny (especially the bit about "yo"), great fun!

9/10!

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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I love Ginny; she's like my grown-up Lilykins. Haha, there was the ghetto humor shining through from my ghetto school (police officers, drug dogs, etc.) Thanks again for the review!

this was so good!!!
I love the remark Lily made about ginny letting her stay out ast seven, like harry told her that she had to be home by seven.
i also loved the last remark by harry, “Oh, and Jacob? You’re not allowed in our house anymore.”
hahahahaha ohhh boy, i loved it.

i love lily and jacob stories! theyre so funny!!!

keep up the good work!!!

love,
quickquackduck4

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Thank you! Haha, that was the implication, wasn't it? Oh, fathers. How amusing they are. :D Thanks again for the lovely review; I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Love it.  I'm finding a whole world of Stargazing beyond the initial fic; wonderful, dear!

Another 10/10!!

--Kate/RP =)

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Thank you; I hope you enjoy this world. :)

hehe ;P
just how i imangend lily´s POV;P
and james and al are overprotectie as always;P

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Oh, older brothers. I wish I could go find some for myself. Thanks for reading! :D

i love these one shots PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more! yes? good! :)

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I will soon, and thanks for the review!

lol, another great one! youve done it again! well done!

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Thanks so much for the review!

hehehe
i love it
i read the others as well
loved them
but am a lazy shit and cannot be arsed to write lots of reviews
again
i love it :)

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Thank you so much, and I know the lazy feeling, trust me.

That was great! I loved it!!! :)

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Thank you!

Hi it's me again! 

After finishing stargazing I thougt it would be appropiate to read this one-shot. I liked it a lot. Especially James and Al's protective ways. I have older brothers, so I know what it's like. When I was little they always said that If I got a boyfriend they would drag him along the ground until he broke up with me, and then drag him again for breaking my heart (oh, brothers, I don't know what I'd do without them)

But now I'm just ranting. 

Once again, I really liked this one-shot :)

~ Charlize

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Thank you! I have three older sisters - not brothers, but close - and nine million older cousins; I can thoroughly relate. I appreciate your review!

oh.love it love it love it bring on the next chapter.

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Thank you, but that's it!

aww it was a little follow up to stargazing!! It's so cute. I love the protective side of harry it's so funny. James and Albus are great too. if i had brothers like that though i would be soo angry at them!

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Thank you! If I had brothers like that (if I ha brothers at all) I'd kill them, but my friends' brothers act like that!

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