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Story: Rain

Love it sooo much :Lxxx

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Thanks :) It was one of my random ideas.

Thats a really sweet story!

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Thanks! I'm glad that you like it!

Sweet. I definitely liked it - I was anticipating the kiss and hoping it would happen. I found it to be a very nice touch. I like the fact that it's a one-shot, and liked the comparison of the wall.
Nice job.

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thanks! I'm glad that you liked it

uh. isnt this kinda sorta like luna and harry (only without the ending).
Only, both of them can see the thestrals, when no one else can. 
idk, i just found it similar. 
So I assume that this was before cedric died? 

I'm sorry, I'm just really confused.
Good way to get started though, maybe add some more details and it'll be great!

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oh yes, it's before
like the year before. i was thinking about that, too. i'm gonna elaborate it more, but it was just a random thought.

I love the feel of this whole story. About letting your heart be open and hearing the music that is around you. And how he did not hear it until he felt the love also. I for once do not have a bad comment about something (very rare) This is hard core being one of my favorites.

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thanks! it took me a while to write this story, and make it actually sound realistic, in a way.

Aw. Cute.

Cedric is patient and pleasant. Kelsey is a curious little one - I wonder what happened in her fourth year... I like rain. It's a nice subject to base the story round. A little rushed and I'm left wanting more, to be sure. Well done. It's sweet.

Cheers.

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kelsey is a curious little one. i'm thinking of actually continuing this story, or at least using her kind of character again.

Great story! I love it!

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thanks! i'm really glad you liked the story!

*melts*
I love this. Just the right mix of romance/fluff with a bit of quirkiness.
I love listening to the rain and the music it makes, even if it makes my knees hurt.
Gorgeous, gorgeous one shot.

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thanks so much! i'm glad that you liked the story.

OMG! that was so cute i loved it&#9829;&#9829;&#9829;

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thanks so much for reading!
hope you like any more stories that i post.

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