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"James, you cannot fly! Do not jump out that window!" PRICELESS! 

Yes, this wasn't the best it could have been, but it was a fun read and was absolutely hilarious!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

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That's the problem with a plot bunny that ends up in a scratched itch. Usually a good start with a lackluster finish, but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway!

Another good story! The only reason I'm angry with you is 'cause it's not longer! Well, better end it before it gets to boring. But it's a good story!

X

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Yup! I didn't want to drag it out past it's time. I'm glad you liked it!

haha... sounds, erm, interesting so far ;P

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Doesn't it just? haha

I totally noticed the little "Anastasia" reverence. (:

~K.K~

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Hehe I couldn't resist!

This sounds hilarious, so far. Can't wait to see how this turns out!

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Hope you enjoy it!

awesome :) :) :) :) :) x

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Thank you!

im luving this story. :) :) :) :) :) x

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Yay thanks!

i dont see how u could be disappointed with this chapter. I actually started howling with laugher when Vika and Hannah came down the stairs and the Marauders had formed a band. Its actually hilarious! well done! :) :) :) :) :) x

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Aww I'm glad! I guess I was worried about it being cheap humor.

no matter what u say this was still an awesome chapter. thumbs up and rating 10/10!!! x

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Thanks for the confidence!

this is rly funny! well done on a successful chapter! :) x

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Thank you very much!

lol that was flippin hilarious lol i loved the story! that last line was great! you are a great author

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I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

I love this story!!

I think the parting line is hillarious!

I was wondering if I could use the book in a story for the 'Next Generation'. I could have James' and Sirius' notes in it.

But if you don't want me to, I totally understand, it's fine.

You are amazing!

:)

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No problem at all! I'm completely flattered that you want to! :D

Wow. that was amazing!!! and hilarious!

=)

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Yay! Thank you! :D

Haha! That was fab =)

The bit when they forgot the baby and that last bit - "James, you cannot fly! Do not jump out that window!” were hilarious, I loved it =)

And Sirius and Vika! Yay!

10/10 =D

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Wooohooo! Glad you think so. :D

"thought it was all that dope he was smoking . . ." maybe that's part of what he had ingested in the past few hours, other than alcohol of course. :) I enjoyed your ending, it closed the story off nicely while still leaving space for our own future thoughts.

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Haha, I think he ingested  many, MANY things over the course of the past few hours, lol. :)

Holy crap, you've finished everything lately. The end wasn't bad; it was even amusing. Especially since I could definitely see James getting drunk and jumping out a window.

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I know! I was on such a roll, and I wanted to get all these finished before the summer really began.

I'm certainly glad to hear the ending wasn't bad. I was a bit worried . . .

that was a bad ending

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I'm sorry . . . ?

Great one, and I love the last line. It really made me laugh! I love this story, and the ending was great, even if you think it's bad. I love Dumbledore too, and when he siad that Remus and Hannah onyl got an E becasue they were divoreced!

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I'm definitely glad you like it . . . I was worried about the last few chapters because they didn't just flow out as the first two or three did.

But I am a bit happy with that last line. :D

Dumbly-dor ;] cracks me up, as do you.

Liz

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Oh, Dumbeldore, that nutter. lol.  :D

And in a year or so, James and Lily will actually be married and start planning round two, this time with a live baby.

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Hopefully they get an 'O' again. ;)

That was good, like a passing of the torch. Or better yet, tossing the garter at a wedding.

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Haha, tossing the garter is funnier. Let's go with that one. :D

I thought James had blown it at the end, when he said no to Lily. But he saved it, and that was good.

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Haha, yeah, all that book-reading for nothing, right?

Wow, James sounds like he never needed that book at all.

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Yeah, he did, though. But he wasn't quite as hopeless as some thought him to be.

Is that book like the "12 Fail-Safe Ways to Charm Witches" that Ron gave Harry for his birthday? Maybe the beginnings of it?

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You know, I hadn't thought of that before. But, perhaps it is an older version of it.

Nice enough, I suppose. I didn't really see the point of this one, though.

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There isn't really, lol.

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