2008-06-01 10:31:47
Omg, if this is the preview then I really want to read the story!!! The preveiw was so, good.
2008-06-01 10:31:47
Ooh no. James is such a ... gah. Not fair. He is very sweet and you portray him quite well. I very much like how he is so smitten with this girl. It's slightly carried away, but endearing in its annoying nature. I think that the trick was woefully predictable (Dan is great) and love poor James for being so eager and naive to the schemings of his lady love.
2008-06-01 10:31:47
AW, very cute, I liked it!

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