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update for god's sake! UPDATE!

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Dude... wow... keep writing... love the scenery you provided... even if most of your writing is actually from the book, you made great reactions from the characters... It'd be interesting to see what Lily and James would have thought if they had already known their futures

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ohh My godd
Your Story is Amazing
I'm Waiting In Anticipation For The next One
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i  Love it (;

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OMG! I love it! I've never read a fic like this! It's absolutely amazing! You have to continue! And soon! lol. It's so good! I'm loving it so much! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

And in answer to ur question on a previous chapter, I think you should continue on with Chamber of Secrets. That way Lily and James and everyone can see all seven of Harry's years at Hogwarts. But that's just my opinion. Anyway, again, I love it and please update soon!

100/10
BG

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This was a wonderful chapter. The story is very well done!

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OMG! i totally LOVE ur story! please please please update soon!

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i really hope tht you continue

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I'm tying to validate the next chapter but its got 2 rejections so far so im trying to get it through really i am lol it'll be up asap!

i think u should do Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets next. nice story ;o) keep up the good work! (for the review 10 would be the best, right?)

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Please keep writing its amazing
i think the idea is so origional.!

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i really like this story...but where is it! i need more, so please do something about it! thanks

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I am going to update as soon as the que re opens- also most of the next chapter after that is done so that will be up shortly after

Awesome!  Please update soon. This is one of,if not the, best fan fiction where the Marauders and Co. read Harry Potter.  I think portray the characters very well.  My only criticism is that you could put in more dialog by Lily, Alice, and the Marauders.

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ah!
im going crazy!
please please please update soon!

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awesome :]
i love this story!

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LOVED IT! MWAH!
dont skip the book and go to the next!! please!! make it pretty please
i wanna see the reactions when it comes to snape... :D:D
thank you for this lovely story.. was second only to the original plot! :D:D

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man i lake the idea so orignal so fantastic.

it is more than a nonth since you wrote please sent more of you work please

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I love their reactions and the story, when is the next chapter?

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I'm about half ay through it--- it takes a lng time to re write the whole chapter and i have a lot of college workto do but i'm going as fast as i can it should be up in the next couple of weeks

I think so far it's a really good story. Some of the parts in this chapter shouldn't have been cut in a weird way, but it's...I guess 'bloody brilliant'?

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hi MeNuncle

i was ahaving a low time and just thought that i'd check why havt u updated and to my delight i found this one updated.guess i missed it.anyways ur story as ususal made my day.i started with a big grin upon my face.

i m slightly sad too.as i noticed u hav lost all my reviews as my accounggot deleted in the hpff downtime.

but no worries.i'll try and make it up for them

and now coming to wat u want.

my fav qoute was the one where hagrid threatens abt never insulting dumbledore in front of him and alice's reply to it

swettest is not a qoute but a moment.
i think its really sweet how lily gave in to james pleding eyes...and how james thought he could never lie to lily...

funniest.all serius replies are going to come there.my fav character ;-)

and well abt the most realistic one...i'll have to say none.nthng realeted to harry potter can be realistic.its simply out of the world...

and finally i'll like to congrats u for such a good update.
and plz plz plz update as soon as possible.

ur stories rock!

always ur fan
simply.love!!!

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how come ur not writting? i LOVE ur story.please continue writing.

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love it!! i really enjoy this story. it's well written and great. i especially like the quips about hagrid being a marauder! keep up the good work.
ps. i think after you finish philosopher's stone you should continue on to chamber of secrets

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"ITs me!"
"Its not you youre dead"
loved it 
but i admit i skip the canon caus i have read it so much
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great idea

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I really like this story and I can't wait to see where it's headed! It's great! =D

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Wow! I'm really enjoying this! It's really tought out so far! And I can't wait for more!

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I love it Amazing
10/10

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i love it
write more!!

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