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I liked it! UPDATE SOON!

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I loved it! It was a great chapter. Keep on writing!

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ooh, wow intense! 
I could kind of see that coming, but i reckon it was really well written! ..again haha.
There were a couple of spelling and grammar errors (like spat instead of spit at one point) but nothing to worry about really!
Anyway, can't wait for the next update! 
Theenix.

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umm i don't mean to be rude but you kinda stole my name. and no offense but this story kinda sucked. i didn't like it. and i agree with luvlunafredgeorge it should have been mature.

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Well, as I said before, I will change the rating.
Sorry you didn't like it, 
and I'm sorry about your name, I didn't know anyone else had it. 
Thanks for taking the time to review!

OMG! That was full on!
Don't you think maybe mature 
would be a little better!
Anyway liked it, even though 
the end was a bit...

Pretty Good.

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Well, I will make it mature.
:)
I tried not to make it too graphic,
But thanks for taking the time to read!

Honestly? I really love it.  
I reckon you've got a really interesting story here...and i can't wait to see how it develops!! And i love your writing style and how you portray the characters. Update soon!!
10/10!!

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Awe that made my day, thanks so much Theenix. I'm putting my new chapter through validation today so hopefully it'll be up within the week.
Much Thanks!
Humdinger,

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