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OMG!!! Adding another guy is such a great idea. Make James jealous!!! Drama, I love Drama!!! When will you update next???

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I love this storyline!!! When will you update next???

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so cute! please continue the story :)

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working on it :|

Nice chapter! James is great. So...immature!
You should really upload chapter 3 :D

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Thanks so much :) 
I'm trying to upload soon, but I'm extremely busy right now :/ But, I'll try my best

Great story! I love the way James is a self centered git. Typical.

"Stop acting like such a girl"
I loved that quote. Hilarious!

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haha Thanks :D 
I'm currently extremely busy.. 
but I will try to upload chapter 3 when I can! :D

I liked this one a lot better- but I'd date James- who wouldn't want to be related to Harry Potter?!

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You make a valid point... but he is annoying and self-centered ... I personally would not go out with a guy like that- no matter HOW famous he, or his parents were... :D 

Thanks again!

Dani

Great- I just had been expecting James to admit his undying love for her- plus you spelt practiCe wrong...

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Did I ? Oops! Well than my spell checker in Word must be faulty... :S 

Do tell me if I have made this too predictable... that is not really what I am going for!!! :P 

Thanks for your review! 

Dani

Ha ha.great chappie. Loved the first one and now I love the second one more! Seriously, please continue writing this. It's funny and surprisingly refreshing, although I do think that the James-and-Savana thing smacks a little too much of the James-and-Lily thing..but that's what makes it so good, right? The whole girl hating the guy thing...I love that! Please keep up the marvellous writing!
Hugs! phoenixfire46

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Thanks for reviewing!! :)

Don't worry... I'll continue :) .. Just right now I have horrible writers block :( 

Oh.. and the Savana && James thing might not turn out the way you expect... But you'll have to wait and see because I haven't decided where I'm going with this yet :P lol I'm liking the whol Girl hates guy thing too :) 

Thank you so much!! 
Dani

Nice story!A bit of Lily/James with a twist, really good!update asap to see how it goes;)

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thanks for you review :D 

I'm not really sure what you mean by lily/james with a twist... but I'm hoping its a good thing? :D lol I'm a little thick sometimes :D 

I'm updating really soon... as soon as my other fic is validated... :D I promise :D :P

LMAO!!!

Too funny!!!

I enjoyed the part about licking the mud off the boots, she should have said something like "Yes, for starters..." ;-)

nicely written

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lol... I'm glad you like it:D 

You are completly right about the mud thing ... and I was going to put something along the lines of that, but...I figure she was too mad and wasn't in the mood for too much joking around... if you know what I mean :P ;-D

Thank you very much for your review :D 

Dani93

when i first saw this story i thought it was a lily and james fic which i have read WAY to many of! i am very intreaged about how this story will unfold so good luck! i will be sure to look for updates!

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Thanks you very much . :D No its definatly NOT a LILY/JAMES fic :D Next Generation for sure :D Thank you very much for the review and I' m looking forward to your reviews ??? :P

Ok...I am waiting for the rest of the list.

I have a feeling I know how this is going to turn out.

Nicely written though.

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Well. you never know do you ...? It could go either way ;P 

Thank you though :D

It's a nice start. A little short, but it was just an intro into the story. Though, I did see one mistake and that you wrote that James' eyes were green when Albus is the only one to have inherited his father's eyes. I believe James' eyes are brown like his mother's. Though I'm only guessing because in the epilogue of the DH it didn't mention his eye color but it did say that Albus was the only one of Harry's children with the infamous green eyes of Lily Potter (I). Anyway, great job and keep it up.

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Thank you very much for pointing that out! I will change it right away! Thanks you very much for your review:D

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