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please please write some more i would like to see the outcome of this story pleeeaassse

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please write again i love this story I'm desperate

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SOOO FREAKIN' AWEEESOMMMEEE!
(haha, with capslock and a lot of !, but apparently you could just do one per time in the review, so we got to imagine, haha)
Wow, just wow, this story is amazing. Loveable and heart-breaking at the same time. You rock. This last chapter is awesome, and sad, I just love that both Lola and Holly gets out their emotions and starts yelling at the guys. Wonderful. I just wish that Lola & Holly could tell each other what they said to the guys & be best friends again, and then just be those two against the school. Awesome, again.
Thanks for the great reading, can't wait for the next chapter!
x Clara

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NO.. no no no no.. no

I've never thought that it would be possible for
me to hate Lily Evans as a character. but i do.
Oh goodness I do, I do. 

I couldn't give half a damn if this story lead
to no baby Harry Potter being born, really.
I'd rather have some kid quoting Othello than being hunted down
by Voldy. 

I love your story, and I'll be stalking this
for every update available! 

I'm officially a LOLA+JAMES shipper.

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ok,
this is actually not about this chapter.
I'm asking,
WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?
goodness.
you can't leave me hanging here, 
i need facts !
haha,
anyways 
keep up the good work!
SBL

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haha sorry i'm in the middle of writing 16 now, i know.. it's about 60% done, and i'm going as fast as i can, and i know im terrible terrible terrible and i should be shot for what i've done to all my readers, but there will be a chapter soon. sorry!!! and you will get facts and laughs and tears and shock (at how bad the writing is) very soon!

I am glad they let it out. Finally. 
James is such a pigmy puff. I am so relieved that Lola has come to her senses and so disappointed that Potter couldn't appreciate her properly. He is so unfair. I guess it couldn't always be smiles and lovelyness. 
I really like Holly.
I mean, she is pure greatness. She is plain and simple right. In every way. I love that she let out on Remus. I am so glad. I hope she put Black in his place. And they will feel it. And I hope that she's finally woken them to their own deficiencies of character. They (but mostly just Sirius) are so petty.
I hope they do defend her freakin' honour now. Even if it is too late.
I loved it. Too much. It was simply splendifferous. As per usual.
Cheers.

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ahhaha pigmy puff indeed! they haven't quite broken up yet, so don't rejoice. they are still together, but this fight has sort of woken both of them up to their feeligns and how they have treated one another. Holly is indeed amazing, she has dealt with everything with the utmost class and grace, and it shows that the boys are really just so silly1

Okay, really Potter, you are getting on my last nerve. What a prat-faced, mean spirited, unfair boy. How could he make Lola choose a side and then completely dismiss her with so little care for her feelings which are obviously reeling from his being a horrible human being...? Oh, right, he's a pratty, spoiled, mean boy. Grr. /Rant
Lola's feelings were bordering on dangerously infatuated but now I fear that that moment we all fear is all too looming... Lola or Lily indeed. Oh dear. I cannot stand that Lily called Lola a Lily-clone. Gah. I could jab her with a cucumber. How rude.

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James is being very bad in this chapter. in this story actually hahaha. i have to redeem him somehow, for he must end up the james that we all know and love (??). And Lily indeed, they are in 6th year and so she is still just 16, but really... she is most jealous and insecure and rude about poor Lola, who does have her faults, but is not by any means a lily clone. Jabbing her with a cucumber seems like a masterful idea.

I did not enjoy that one bit. Alright, so maybe I enjoyed it a teensy weensy bit... but not a happy go lucky pleasant way. That was horrible. <i>James</i> was <i>horrible</i>. I really don't like that he's blaming someone else for the actions of his two silly petty friends. I can believe that he'd do such a thing, but I really resent it, sort of. But not as much as I resent the horrid deafening silence that came from Sirius and Remus. I thought that at least one of them would have the courtesy, the decency, to stand up for the girl they like when she is being humiliated by their best friend. Honestly.

/Rant

I loved it. Oi, did I. I am so with Holly on this one. Poor kid. 
Cheers.

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Holly all the way. she is fabulous, and remus/sirius/james are silly. very very silly. James is being so stpid at the moment, i dont blame you for not liking him at the moment.

Sirius and Remus both lost. Holly is too right. Poor girl. It's not her fault that boys are idiots who don't know how to talk out feelings. And James, boy, that one is mighty slow. I love him for it of course but, bless him, he annoys me in a big way. I love El Oh El Ay. She is such a sweet kid.
Cheers.

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you can tell whose side i'm on, can't you? Holly all the way. Actually the girls all the way hahaha. Ah well, im glad you enjoyed the story and that you are enjoying it still! thanks for reviewing!

I am so glad that she prefers Remus; they're great together. I feel kind of annoyed at Sirius, which may or may not be completely fair. James is such a boy. Oi. Lola is such a sweet kid. First party indeed.

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Remus is a darling, and they are very cute together indeed. but all is not ever yet. thanks for reviewing!

Lola is a dear but I feel more for Holly. Poor kid has practically lost her friend who, as you mention, is rather self absorbed and taken away with her own emotions. I'm glad that she's happy. It's really nice that she's so completely content. Remus and Sirius are so awkward that I can barely stop laughing. I like that Lola tells James things bluntly, it's incredibly sweet. I find it sad that James has no idea that his friends are getting themselves into a sticky situation. Poor kids.

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Holly is not having an easy ride at all this story. But she does emerge out of the story as the bigger, better person. Lola, despite being the heroine, is a little on the selfish side. Im glad that you like it and are enjoying my crazy marauders!

I love this story!
Please update soon!
10/10

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thankyou! im glad you like it.

Oh wow, I loved this chapter! It was worth the wait. I hope you are able to update soon thought! :) Great job, the breaking point for the girls, I loved it.

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thanks so much! im glad you liked it... i will definitely try and update again as soon as i can.

James is always out of line. What shall we do with him? Poor, poor Lola, she tried so hard to keep their relationship above water, but in the end, I'm glad she broke up with him. Please, please, please, please, please update soon, the wait for this chapter took forever, let's hope it doesn't happen again!

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ah! they haven't broken up... yet... 
they're still tgoether, they just had a huge fight..
you'll see next chapter. 
and i'm so sorry, really, i'm terrible and i just feel awful. i should have done something about it. the next chap is about half written, and i will do my best to get it up before next year hahahah .

thanks for commenting!

i am seriously pissed.
i love your story and all,
but god,
UPDATE!
if your not going to continue at least put this under the category abandoned. 
by the way;
james is an ass
lola deserves way better.

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hahaha im not a trusted author anymore, but there is a chapter for this story in this queue as we speak hahaha! 
i know i'm terrible. i'm so sorry, just exams and everything came and took over, but i should be able to update more frequently now. :D
and yes, james is pretty bad. next chapter is goin to make anyone think much better of him either. 
thanks for your comment!

This was great! I've gotten so into the story, I just couldn't stop reading it. You've a great talent for writing, I enjoy reading your work. Can't wait to see the next chapter!

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thankyou very much, im glad you enjoy it so much. i have a lot of fun writing this story, so i love hearing from people who like reading it.

Oh dear lord, I feel terrible for Holly, I just wanted to cry right along with her. Very good chapter, you captured the emotion and intensity so well.

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Holly is a darling, isn't she? And how horrible for her at the hands of boys/Lola. she doesn't deserve it. thanks for reviewing.

Oh Wow! Wow, wow, wow. A duel? That's great, great work here. And the plot thickens...

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m... DRAMA! im glad you like it!

That's a lovely chapter. I liked the party, and I'm glad Holly and Remus are talking again. Poor Sirius! A very complicated weave you have here.

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yes they are, although all is not well for long. Complicated indeed! you shall see just how complicated in chapters to come haha. Glad you liked it.

I feel so bad for Holly. Isn't it true though, the friends you rely most on are the ones that you realize the least.

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indeed. She is much put upon by Lola, who will realise it only too late.

Oh my God, drama, drama, drama! This was quite the chapter! Can't wait to see where this is going, cause I can't guess and that is just great!

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hahah indeed. the plot thickens (considerably). thanks for reviewing!

This was a very good chapter. The Hogsmeade trip was great. I feel so bad for Holly and Remus, I hope they figure everything out!

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me too. Holly is a dear and i want her to be happy. thanks for reviewing.

Oh god, I feel so bad for Lily, and I feel so happy for Lola and James. This is nuts! Great job, I'm loving it.

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I know, crazy feelings everywhere! im glad you are liking it, and thanks for reviewing!

Ah, a date! Sort of. I just love how you write! I feel sorry for Oscar, but I do favor James, and I'm sure it can't work out because of Lily, but it's still sad. But enough about that, they're falling in love! How perfectly wonderful.

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i favour james too, but you can't help feeling bad for him, he just can;t measure up. It is wonderful indeed. THanks for reviewing!

This was a very sweet chapter. Ah, young love. Very sweet, very lovely, and very well written.

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young love indeed! so innocent and so intense at the same time. glad you like it.

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