wow, you havea way with words and i love the personality you've given Gabriel with out really discribing him, like you can sort of picture him sitting there writting something loking down at hermione as she sleeps

Author's Response: I have always had a small problem with describing people. This way I can tell the story while leaving him "out", lol. Beisdes, I have never really had a clear vision of his looks...
intresting. i never actully thought of what gabriel did before i got my hands on him hehe *joke* but it gives me something to think about and love the way you've written this as well

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you.
2008-01-26 06:35:20
luv the story ur a great writer cant wait 4 the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you. :) It might take some time to make the third chappie, but I'll try my best to finish it quickly.
2007-10-06 15:50:32
I loved it, absolutely loved it! Now I know more about the lovely (if not somewhat frightening) Gabriel. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. And as the story goes on, we'll be seeing much more of Gabriel's... uhm, not-that-human side. I'm glad you liked it.
Awww...That was...Sad and brilliant. I like the way that you made Gab. to tell the story after she died, its a really good idea.

I think if you add more feelings in there will be great, not just descriptions about her life, well, surely we know she felt depressed about what she was and the sad descriptions, but if you can just add some specific descriptions about her feelings will make this even better.

Great work.

Red Slipper! 9/10

Author's Response: Thank you for your excellent review.

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