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The story has been very interesting.  You keep me hoping and guessing what is going to happen.  I wonder when all this is done will they all remember it.
May I ask when will you write again. Thank you

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It's good to know people are still reading my story. I always like to keep you guys guessing. I haven't had much time to write lately because of school. After finals next month I'm hoping to publish a couple of more chapters. Sorry it can't be sooner. Thanks for the feedback and glad you enjoy the story :)

I have read all your chapters.  I like stories that are 
different.  I am enjoying your story.  It is memorizing.
I look forward to reading each chapter.  
I keep wondering how William is going to change the future.   Keep the good story going.Thank you

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I appreciate the review. It helps to know people like what I am writing

So glad to see that you finally updated! I've found this story intriguing from the beginning. Can't wait to see William playing quidditch. Keep up the good work! Don't keep us waiting too long!!

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I'll try. I'm writing the next one as i speak. sorry for the long wait again. keep reading and enjoying :)

It was great to finally see an update and the story progressing.  I am excited to see William reunite with his friends and to find out what really is going on with all of them.

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that will be comng shortly in the next few chapters. there will be another character coming that has yet to reveal themself so there's that to enjoy as well. thanks for the great review!!!

Wow! This is awesome! I love the whole story and can't wait for more!

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Thanks for the review! I appreciate the feedback.

is this story abandoned? nothing for 5 months

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finals and 18 credits are a killer right now. i should have something up by the new year

Interesting story...update soon!

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thanks! I'm gonna update soon but classes are really piling on the work.

Awesomeness from beginning to end, I'm glad Teddy was still alive, you had me sad there for a minute. WTG !

Author Response

Thanks again! I took your advice on getting the story moving. From this point on, there won't be any more 4 chapters to a day. I'm glad you liked it!

this is a very captivating story. your writing is some of the best i've seen in years.

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Thank you very much. I always appreciate feedback from my fans! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Well i really like some of ye style thru the serie so far, tho the curse words are abit to Muggle for Wizzard/witches imo, tho its otherwise pretty good and it goes into the orginal series without contreticting anything in J.k Rowlings work.

The only question i really have is..How many more Chapters ll it be before u finish this story?

After all its been a WiP for 2years soon, and i read faster than you invent the story:)

Author Response

When I first started writing this story I thought it would have taken alot less longer. I've gotten most of my ideas clear now and all I have to do is find the time to write. A double major and a part time job doesn't leave too much time to write. It should be over in another 15-20 chapters. The story will progress alot more in the coming chapters. Glad you liked it!

Well, that was interesting. I am ready for the story to move on a bit now. It's a great plot, and you story telling skills are wonderful. I dare not make guesses at the moment yet though, I need another chapter, then I'll give some more guesses and such. 10/10

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As always, thank you for the positive review. i will move the story on a bit in the next two chapters. I have time off from work so i'll be able to get it out sooner than believed. thanks again!

makes me want to read more

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keep reading and reviewing! I greatly appreciate the positive feedback!

hey
this is a really cool story so far iv just started reading it and i already like it
good job
xox

Author Response

thanks alot! I always appreciate the reviews. Sorry about the lateness of my chapters. With finals and everything else going on i'm trying to publish another within the next week

What did I think? How about, WoW! You get a little busey with school and your mind worked in the background set on full speed. This was a wonderful chapter to read. I cant wait to read the next chapter, hopefully you had finals that week!
Bravo!

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finals and alot of other stuff. i'm coming up on spring break so the chapters should be coming

GREAT CHAP! But way too long. I hope we don't have to wait so long for the next. The cliffy is tough to swallow as you have introduced some new (major) plot lines. I'm impatiently curious to see where we go from here but it looks like our friends will be taking a much bigger roll in the story. Please post soon-Charlie

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i'm halfway done with the next chapter. By the time I finish that and wait for it to get approved, it should be out within the next two weeks. and it was too long of a wait, I apologize

WHAT WHAT DO U DARE DO ANYTHING BAD

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I try not to

RON/ HERMIONE AND HARRY/ GINNY MORE OF THAT PLEASE
this story is very addicting

Author Response

I'll get to them more once I paint the rest of william's story

less less of william black hes a good character but more of ron and hermione and harry and ginny romance would be nice 
but anyway great job !

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Thank you. I'm trying to incorporate more of them into the story

ur chapters are so so so long ^^
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I know. I just have a lot to say

AGAIN WOW ! ! ! :):):):):)

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glad it you like. read on!

what the fuc** i loved it so much the was so much drama and excitment in this chapter wow. so much i couldnt stop reading. so much was happening. amazing how the stranger healed her, its kinda like the movie atlantic (KEDA)
please do this again wow i cant wait !

Author Response

i'm glad you liked it. keep reading because it gets even better

I really love this story! I have been reading it since this summer and it is on my feed! I am always so excited for a new chapter! It is cool how you have clues about the future.

Author Response

I'm glad you like it so much. My latest chapter, The Circle of Phantoms should be out by 2/22. If you like clues from the future then you'll love this chapter. Thanks for the review!

this is getting really really really exciting... bits and peices are sarting to add up together..

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the next chapter should be out coming in the next week or so, and trust me, more will add up

Wow, this is getting interesting. Isn't Virgil possible Hugo that why he is so familar to Hermione because it's her son in the future.

Author Response

No, Virgil is Virgil. In the next chapter Hermione reveals that she recognized him from the picture William showed them

The plot thickens. I liked the new people you brought in for a cameo. They were believable. Great job. Hope College is settling down for you a little. Suggestion: Halloween, go grab some friends and go see the Rockey Horror Picture Show. It's a classic. And , don't forget to take a deck of cards and a news paper. Ta Ta !!!

Author Response

I'll give it some thought. Thanks for the review!

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