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Omg sirius is such a typical man! He needs to pull his head in

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Haha poor jealous sirius. And the teachers betting on sirius' maturity lol

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Haha it seems all the teachers are rooting for sirius and Vienna. Or as others call it..'shipping'..? 
Great chappie!

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Poor vienna! I'm so excited, I'm getting the feeling things are really going to start shaking up.
 And she's wearing quills in her hair again! Yay!

I feel like watching Hairspray now!

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That was awful of sirius!

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That was interesting. Goodchapter

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I'm enjoying this story a lot. It's nice to read a light hearted, funny Sirius/oc story for a change. And i love how quirky Vienna is. She reminds me of myself.

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I absolutely adore this story so far! 
You're an amazing writer! You have 
such a great writing style that makes 
this story difficult not to love. I always 
hate it when I find a story that has an 
interesting plot but is ruined by quality 
of the writing. (or lack there of) I 
literally burst out laughing to the point 
where I had tears in my eyes at the 
part when Rohan tells Sirious that he 
likes him and then kisses him. :)

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You have such a beautiful and individual writing voice i'd love to read some original stuff and see if it translates its really inticing and vienna would be like my perfect girl so quirky if you have any original stuff id like to read it sincerly

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Consider this story a job well done. it's been a pleasure to read and I'm glad it wasn't terribly deprEssing at the end as so many marauders fics are. Cheers to Vienna and Sirius

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A+ chapter I really love how frazzled Sirius gets around his girl, but I would also love to see more confidence that Jkr created him with. I know he's different because of Vienna but I'd love to see him try and actually win her over. All and l great chapter

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Lol when u started quoting hairspray! Ah I'm in love with this story. Your writing style is really unique so u should be very pleased. Also bear in mind I'm a harsh critique so please be proud of yourself because I really am sniping your story and I never review but I have every single chapter because your story is with it. Cheers to Vienna and allthe odd kids out there (myself included)

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Lol lily! I love your portrayal of her, her unwavering courage to stand up for those who cannot. Just truely remarkable really. A true gryfindor! Really excellent chapter :)

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This story has taken some easeing into, but I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to the next. Keep up the good work. I also really enjoyed seeing dumbledore and vienna's relationship and I hope to see more in upcoming chapters. Cheers

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Sirius is acting a bit more roughish in this chapter so that's an improvement from the feminine side he expressed last chapter... I'd like to see more bad boy sirius ness myself. Ps this is a lovely story I just choose to five criticism in my reviews rather then praise but know it's womderful

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I think sirius's transformation happened really rushed and he seems gay now... It had to be said. I think he's straying away from jar's description of him to be honest

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A muggle is a non magical person. You refer to Vienna several times throughout the chapters as this because she is muggle born. These are not the same things so I believe it is a mistake worth fixing. Other than that the story is shaping out quite wonderfully with the expection of Vienna not having Amy friends. Not one? if you thought of every kid at your school I'm willing to bet u can't think of one who doesn't have a friend. It's a bit unrealistic to say she doesn't have friends unless she is a horrible human being, which from what ive read does not seem like the case

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This story is amazing! and kinda sad

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i absolutely loved it, it was on a completly different level.
THANK YOU!

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This was a lovely story, but more than anything I loved your writing style. You have a very definite voice. I think I shall go read all of your other stories now!

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As I usually does, and did this time too, I read the whole story first, and then write a review in the last chapter for the whole series. So just so you know, this is for the whole series.

And gah! I can't describe how much I love this story, it's just so unbelievably amazing! It's brilliant, it really is. You write so good! And the whole chapter 14, Rahon liking and kissing Sirius, is just so genius, the whole story is.

There's not enough thank you's to say too you for writing this story.
But.. thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for giving me and so many other's such good reading. Thank you.
x Clara

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This story is so silly in it's writing which makes it a real joy to read! I'm making my way through it and find myself once again glad to have stumbled upon it :-) Thanks for writing!

xTanya

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This is really cute so far! I'm enjoying the way you write, with a narrator telling their story - I haven't read one like this yet on the site. It's a fun first chapter and I'm sure I'll have fun reading the rest, as well :-) Thanks for writing!

xTanya

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:)
this was really good :D
it is very well written, barely if any mistakes in grammar or spelling. it was written from a very interesting point of view as well though, i mean that in the nicest way possible :D
i throughly enjoyed reading this ^.^

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All I can say is that this was everything I love in a story. It was lighthearted and quirky, and unique.

I thought the way you ended it was really sweet, I know I always feel horrible when I read a marauders story that ends in tradgic deaths.

Thankyou for a beautiful story. :)

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