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Really good, and out of all the ear related jokes, you chose HOLEY?!!

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haha well done, I approve. unfortunately for the life of me i can't remember George's response - time for a re-read I guess!

thanks for reading and reviewing! always a nice surprise to see some activity on here. cheers.
~holey-for-lack-of-better-jokes-the-saint

Wow, yeah, my review is about 5? years too late?:)) I loved the chapter, though I must say there is a clash with the Canon. If you can remember, it was James who was Head-Boy, not Remus
XOXO

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Hiya, thanks for reading and reviewing! Yes I know, I made the change on purpose, just thought it fit with my storyline a bit better. Sorry! lol. Glad you liked it anyways.Cheers!

Totally loved your story and you owe me a sleepless night hahaha I was completely in distress when Alex went missing. Really got Sirius crazy here (commented cliché haha). Very well done. Caa xx

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oooh was I really able to keep you reading the whole night through? awesome! ;)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, always a pleasure reading such nice comments!
Cheers.

(and I fully appreciate and approve of your cliche use ^.^)

Alex  is a Mary Sue. It he plot is a really good idea, but it's progressing a bit fast.

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hi thanks for your review! Alex being a bit of a Mary Sue is part of the clicheness of the story which is explained at the very end.  Sorry it's a bit fast, I don't know what to blame that on except maybe it being my first story and having no sense of timing/pacing whatsoever haha.  
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Great to hear from you, I hope you make it to the end of the story!
Cheers!
^.^

NEVER STOP WRITING.  YOUR WRITING IS SO AMAZING THAT IF YOU STOP I WILL BRUTALLY MURDER YOU!  WRITE MORE!

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um... thank you, I guess...?  (flattered, really I am, but the caps+murder isn't exactly a good combination :P )
unfortunately this is the end of the story, for now at least - I did keep writing but its in such bits and pieces that I don't ever think it'll turn into a proper story.
Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm glad you liked it enough to consider homicide... I guess ;)
Cheers.

oh my merlin. That was so funny. Actually every chapter is funny. (I really((x9)) like your story)
(You might as well get used to me. I'm kinda crazy when it comes to these things)

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this was actually one of my favourite chapters, almost tipped the scale in favor of Remus/Alex, but alas it wasn't meant to be ;)
Great to hear from you! Thanks!
Cheers.

This is like the 3rd time I read this. So don't feel confused if you see I like review and review and review. k? Son now back to the story. :D(In case you don't get it, it means I really really really like your story)

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Review as much as you like ;) 
I love reading reviews, especially ones that make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, like yours.  Thanks again!  Cheers!

May I tell you something? Yes, yes.. I read ALOT of fanfiction. And this was by far one of the BEST I HAVE EVER READ. You deserve some award. I feel like I was sucked into the story myself! You certainly deserve a reward.

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wow thank you so much! I'm absolutely flattered and honored that you liked the story so much!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Cheers ^.^

So...what happens when you hit what actually happens i.e. James and Lily die, Peter is a twit, Remus fades away for a bit, and Sirius is in Azkaban? How might Alex fit into that?

I would very much like to know... Hinthintsequelhintyhint
Otherwise, story was bossdog.

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well.I have a general idea of what I would like to happen in the events leading up to and including the Potter's death, and after...but I haven't ever put it down on paper.  but you never know, maybe one day when I have some time to properly sit down I will try to write it all down.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!  So glad you liked the story.  Cheers!

Damn, Alex buried Brad good! I was laughing so hard when I read it!

Oh, and perhaps Regulus had something to do with the whole 'orb' thing? Because, we all know about his fake Horcrux in the 6th/7th book, right?Just a theory ;)

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I'm glad you thought it was good, it was actually much harder to write than I had thought it would be.
I hope you kept reading it to find out if your theory about Regulus is correct ;)
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At last, Sirius has figured out his feelings for Alex!! Phew! I thought he never would :)

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haha yep it took a while but hopefully it was worth it ;)
thanks for reading and reviewing! Cheers.

very good you get an A+ i like it all very good read this is for the entire story

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thanks so much!  Glad you liked it!
Cheers!

nothing more needs to be said

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thanks so much :)
cheers!

Amazing story! Nuff said!

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thanks so much! glad you liked it :)

Haha, yay! I loved it!

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glad to hear it! thanks for reading and reviewing!
Cheers :)

YES!! I'm a Twilight fan!! I love the interaction between the Marauders :D

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wow i completely forgot about my twilight question in the A/N, thats how long ago i wrote this hahah.  Thanks for reading!  And for leaving a review!
Cheers!

AAaw! That was such a cute ending to the chapter! I really like the idea about 'The Truth' game, I wish I'd thought of it! XD

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thank you!  Great to hear you liked it!
the 'truth game' was basically my magical version of 'truth or dare' hahah
Cheers!
:D

OOH!! I LOVE IT!!!

Uver-used cliches used well...dificult, but you did fabulous! I love how she wasn't the kind of girl eho giggled over Sirius the minute she sees him!

KEEP WRITING :D

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thanks so much!  I'm glad you liked it, and appreciate the review!
Cheers :)

I wish that you would continue the story to see where they are in ten years.That would be so great.thanks for the story I enjoyed reading it.

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aha!  so you did finish the story!  yay!  *happy*
lol
Great to hear you enjoyed the story, thanks so much for reading AND reviewing :)
I have been playing around with ideas as to what-happens-after (I think I always imagined JKR's story coming into play eventually, with perhaps some changes) but didn't come up with anything substantial enough to make a story out of it...maybe one day though (when I have more time and am not constantly procrastinating studying ;)
Till then, perhaps you can fill in the blanks yourself :D
Thanks again!  Cheers.

I have to tell you I love this story.its been a while since I've read such a great fanfic.i hope you still read your reviews.I can't wait to read more.thanks

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thanks so much!  I'm glad you like it, and hopefully you continued reading (and still liked it)
Cheers!
Ps - of course i still read my reviews.  I don't check back everyday... but I thrive on them :)

this was a really good story but deffently not short od cliches ;) but what happenes after, or just leaving it as a happy ending till JK Rowlings full story comes into place?

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yay cliches :D
Yes, I definitely want JKR's story to come into place, but I'm not sure what happens in between - I was contemplating some additional plot points but never got around to making something substantial out of it.  I think the great part - or at least what I love -  about open endings (not just in this story) is that the reader can take the story wherever they want it, make it finish or not finish.  So maybe you can fill in the blanks between the ending and JKR's story yourself :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Great to hear from you, and I'm glad you liked the story!
Cheers.

OMG!
Can't believe its over! Been my life saver for the past Wk!
Really really good no fantastic!
rated 9

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thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm really glad you liked it (and that my creation was a life-saver ;)  Cheers!

haha, great story, love the ending. I love how you managed to include something so bizzare and 'special' as the orbe, but it didn't seem impossible, it didn't seem like something that never could have occured in the books. It was wonderful, believable, sweet and I loved it!

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thanks so much!  I'm glad you liked it, and thanks especially for commenting on the orb - useful to know that it was believable :)
Cheers!

FANFREAKING AMAZING! Lovely story, absolutely lovely. I don't have much to say about it right now but I love your writing!

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Thank you!  I'm so happy to hear you liked the story, and my writing style; absolutely flattered.  Thanks again!  Cheers!

at first i didnt know if i would like this story, but it turned out to be amazing, the cliches are their because everyone likes them and by using them together you made a wonderful story (:
 - Lfg

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aww thanks so much!  I'm really glad you liked the story, and the cliches! :D  
Cheers!

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