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Is that the end? (piz say no)

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AHHH! That was me squealling! "I love you,"  OMG how romantic

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Different, still confused on the year though.

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Confusing but good, I like it alot

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It Was Beautiful And Brilliant Story.

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I liked it a lot. But the McGonagall and Dumbledore thing was a bit strange.

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I know. I didn't realise dumbledore was gay until AFTER I wrote this!

So this is it. It was a sweet story and I liked it very much

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thanks :D
Am a tiny bit embarrassed about this one though, bearing in mind it was my first story.

I guess that green spell was not the killing curse. And Dumbledore knew that only love can heal certain things.  Love wins love remains.

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Yup, it was another fatal curse. One created by the Death Eaters, I don't think I made that clear.

So tell her already. They keep getting interrupted. That's very frustrating. But  I guess if it wasn't for those interruptions they wouldn't really know if their feelings were real or not.

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I guess. They were frustrating to write too!

That was not very nice. Some girls can be very possessive.  And others can be so sweet like Hermione.

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I know the feeling.

The first challenge went well. They know they like each other.

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I know! It's going well so far.

Well, but the girl gets to choose who she wants. I know hands down it will be Harry.

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Lol, I totally agree.

That was interesting. Ron can be such a prat.

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Ron is my example, as a feminist, of one of the guys that REALLY infuriates me,

So we have love already. How sweet. This is good.

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Love at first sight as some would call it :p

Interesting start. I little different take. But I can go with this.

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Good :p I'm glad

omg! I love this! I read it ages ago before I got a account, and I've spent the last few months trying to find you again! I really love all your writing!

One thing though, you mix up your 'you're' with your 'your' it's not a big thing, but it should be fixed, it ruins your awesome stories!

10/10
kisses!
Lisa

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Nah, I don't think it "ruins" my "awesome" stories. (hehehe, "awesome", I'm soo childish) I do get my you're(s) and your(s) wrong, I haven't really covered that subject a lot in school, they just expect you to know it! But I'll research it and hopefully improve my stories with it.
Thanks
Maesygirl

nice story but too short

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oh ok

Ahhh. love is in the air. Perfect bliss.

Very good story. Couple of punctuation mishaps, but apart from that, love the writing style. I plan to read your other stories.

9/10! 
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Thank you!!! and i will re-read the story and recover the mistakes for next time.

Where did you find that picture, that's awesome?! It really looks authentic, and what should have happened in the books.

For a moment, I thought Snape would be the only one chasing Hermione, and that Harry, who's always been suspicious of the grease-ball would assume the worst.

Oh, and in the story you never answered who let the Death Eaters in to attack Hermione, or is that going to be answered in a sequel?

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I can't remember where I found that picture, I've had it saved to my computer for AGES!

Snape is trying to stop Hermione from getting to Harry, that's all, nothing more.

And if you look at you're last review, I explained then.

I have two main suspects in this.

Suspect one: Parvati Patil, the girl who likes Harry and is jealous of Hermione. Might kill to get Harry.

Suspect two: Severus Snape, the so-called ex-Death Eater, might have noticed Harry's crush on Hermione and didn't want to teach another Potter later. As a teacher, he could easily have opened the gates, or maybe lowered the wards enough to let them through. And yes, I don't trust Snape. (ignore my penname)

P.S. Could you check out my stories? I would really appreciate it.

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Snape has nothing whatever with the deat eaters, they just kind of, got in. It sounds pathetic, but Voldermort was sensing Harry's feelings and he sent them, channeling Harry's love, love is the most powerful power.
P.S I'll have a look at you're stories when I can.

About time! And would it have been too forward if Harry had started snogging her during those three minutes. I'm sure she would have looked great if she was freshly-kissed, especially by a Potter.

And Harry's line about it being hard to perfect perfection was brilliant! Harry must have inherited something from James after all. 10/10

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Yes, it would have been to forward if Harry had started snogging her, because he is, in my eyes, a shy, modest, and tender person, it's just not him
Harry has inherited a lot from James, but also his great understanding of feelings from Lily, though in the book he's nearly as bad as poor Ron!

What in Merlin's name is Parvati doing?! Why isn't she off with a couple of other boys? 8/10 because Parvati upset Hermione.

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Parvati's being a proper old fashioned bitch, or perhaps not so old fashioned, perhaps like in school today, she's determined to win Harry over from Hermione, not that it's working...

Come on, come on, I'm waiting for Harry to ask her out already. But at least Ron's not going to try to steal her, because he likes Luna. Right? 10/10

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Ron's not going to try and steal her, because he's her friend, and could never see her as anything more than that, like Harry and Hermione's relationship in the books.

First Hogsmeade weekend Harry's going to ask her out, right? Or will he prove that the early bird does in fact get the worm and ask her out ASAP? 10/10

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Aha!

I like it better if Hermione has to depend on Harry for some things at least, it would give the poor boy a damsel in distress. Potters are very good at handling those, hehe. 10/10

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Well ... I believe in equality between women and men, so therefore, there won't be any damsels in distress in my stories! If anything there'll be boys in distress!

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