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You need to write a sequel, my sanity depends on it! Haha, I love, LOVE this story. :)

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wow!! one of the funniest things I had ever read!please , no pretty please , verry pretty please , could you update one more chapter? please.
Anna

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DO A SEQUAL!!! PLEASE!!!

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you have to write the next one this is so good

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i love it. please continue

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Great writer and great story - keep smiling :)
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This is great i cannot wait until you post the next chapter!!!
Im excited, and have a headache from laughing to much...

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hehe!
please update!
x golden x

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I love it! It's funny and their personalities are amazing! Can't wait for the next update!

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i like.

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that's nice. :D

It's funny and I wonder on what they'll do to a certain silly dog once they got out.  I'll bet Sirius forgot about all about them.  *L*

A good story but I would advice that you get a beta.  You got a great dialogue going and with humour fics - dialogues is very important.  However there are typos and minor grammar-related errors.

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I bet Sirius had Remus put a light outside the closet that will blink and buzz and say everyone hide it's the apocolypse once they finally kiss

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Hmm. Okay, thanks. *searches for dictinary*

So, here's the review I promised at the forums ^^

Ehm, okay, where to begin :P You need to work a tiny bit on your grammar and spelling, and you occasionally miss a letter or a space here and there. Other than that it was... original. The whole last four fifths of the chapter is only dialog (which you know as you are the writer), and it might get a bit wearisome after a while...

Other than that it was a sweet and funny fic, rather abrupt ending, but it was entertaining :D

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English isn't my native, so no wonder that I have mistakes, and I'm sorry about them.
Thank you for reviewing. ^^

That was tha bomb. I loved every inch of ur story. Please, please please continue to write. I want to know how long it'll take for lily to realise that Potter is her one true love!

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How long? 4 chapters. :P Oh, i was spoiler-ing, I'm sorry.
Thank you, I will. If only I won't have problems with validating again. *shakes head*. Nee dto re-read rules, I guess.
*sigh*

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tas bija problem&#257;tiski, protams. :D
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I added next chap, so you mus wait only 7 days, darlings. ^^

It seems soo funny!  I LOVE IT!   Keep writing can't wait for the next chapter!*Pikachu*

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Thank you. Your panneme makes me smile. :D

Hey, girl, I'm happy that you're using my banner and more happy that you did it! *gives a cookie* Update soon and give a kiss from me to Maxim. 
Denija (from kurbijkurne ^^)

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Hi, Den, I'll do anything that you want, because you made a banner for me. *happy dance*. Maxim will be happy, lol.

1:39.bet...paaraak latviski..:D

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Thanks. I would like to know who are you? (I mean in kurbijkurne). :D

haha, this was so funnyyy. *two thumbs up* great job,

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I'm glad that you laughed. :D Thanks.

i love it! don't let them out for ages plz!
so funny, am sitting here chuckling 2 myself, g8 story!
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I'm waiting meesage from Maxim (my beta). Ass soon as I get next chapter, I'll put it here.

haha! love it! update soon!

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I'll try. Thanks you.

Lol, keep up the good work.

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Will try, thanks. :D

That is just so funny, I am sitting here cracking up, I'm sorry but that is just too good

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Too good? Oh, that's great. :D

haha! i like it. i can't wait to see the rest. very funny.

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*happy smile* Thanks!

This is so funnny! You should really continue with it. Although I do think that it's a bit repetitive, so maybe in the next chapter you can put some more action or something.

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Next chap I send to my beta, will see what he'll say. And thanks you for your review. :)

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