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I really loved this! You write so beautifully. The descriptions and emotion were so aptly portrayed. Thanks for putting it up for us to read. I really enjoyed it. One of the better songfics- though I too don`t particularly like songfics.

Author Response

Thank you so much that's so very sweet of you to say.  I don't like songfics either so I'm glad you liked mine, even though technically, I wouldn't call it a songfic so much as it was inspired by a song.  Thanks for taking the time to review.  ~Enchanted

salve! so this was brilliant. the style was ... i dont know the word. old i guess. i want to say archaic but im pretty sure it has connotations of outdated. which im pretty sure means old in a bad way. which this isnt. its old in a good way. classic? whatever it was, it was brilliant.
a question about the lyrics - what does ain mean? english not being my mother tongue, old slang (as im guessing this is) is really hard for me to understand. i mean, i cant look it up in a dictionary... perhaps something like "one"?

Author Response

Ain means 'Own' as in My Own True Love.  Yes the style is classic by design.  I was weaned on the classics growing up.  I fight my tendency to write in this style all the time I tend to be a bit poetic in my writing style.  I love Jane Austen and Charlotte Bronte and to some extent I imitate the writing style.  The song lyrics are from the movie Cold Mountain.  If you are interested in hearing the song search for My Ain True Love on YouTube.  I think you'll like it.  Thank you so much for reviewing.  ~Enchanted

Well, even if I prefer the chapters in your story, Power, the descriptions and imagery in this are spectacular.  The angst is palpable, but I prefer the happier stories, lol.  But simply the fact that you made me feel the angst, pain, and horror of that scene is testament to your talent, even if I would rather live in my imaginary happy place ;o).

Author Response

I donâ€™t usually go with angst for angst sake.  This was my attempt to describe a battle/action scene, kind of broaden my literary horizons so to speak.  Itâ€™s not how I hoped it would turn out, but Iâ€™m pleased with it nonetheless.  Iâ€™m glad you enjoyed it even though angst isnâ€™t your cup of tea.  It's not mine either, I like my happy place too :-P  ~Enchanted

Liked the story, but if my memory of Latin grammar serves me correct, iacta alea est should be written alea iacta est.

Author Response

I'm glad you liked it.  And you're correct it is alea iacta est.  That's totally my fault, I should have confirmed it before putting it down on paper and looking like an ignoramus.  I still forget in which order "I came, I saw, I conquered' is in Latin - but who can blame me really 'veni, vidi, vici' all those v's - Jeez!.  Thank you for taking the time to review.  ~Enchanted

Wow. Wow. Wow. Thank you. Wow.

Author Response

Thank you ,thank you , thank you.  And you're welcome. Thank you!  :-P  I'm very pleased that you enjoyed my litte one-shot.  Thanks for reviewing, it means the world to me.  ~Enchanted

Wow. That was one of the most beautifully written stories I have read yet. Thank you so much for the wonderful experience, and again...Wow. =^.^=

Author Response

*Blush*  Thank you so much for your kinds words, what a lovely endorsement of my work.  Thank you for taking the time to leave a review, it is so very much appreciated.  ~Enchanted

I agree about the fact that most song fics really do not capture the essence of the song. But I think that you did the most fantastic job I have read thus far. GREAT JOB!

Author Response

Thank you.  While this isn't a songfic necessarily, I <i>was</i> inspired by it.  I thank you so very kindly for the compliment.   Thank you so much for taking the time to review.  ~Enchanted

One word: awesome! Nothing else can describe this. You convey emotions into your writing very well! Just.wow! Looking forward to more from you! 100/100

Author Response

One response: Thank you!  I am so pleased that you like my writing and my stories.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review, it means so very much to me.  ~Enchanted

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