2007-03-28 21:45:35
This could be a even more awesome story if you added more!
Did that make sense?!
Chow,
~Janet~
really i would luff it if u added more, but its so sweet and perfect like this w just enuff background that u dont need 2. its just fluffy enuff and the transition b/w hating him and liking him isnt too rushed. its very good! (to be honest, im pretty sure this is the first time ive reviewed and actch talked about the story the whole time) 10/10!!! xP
2007-03-28 21:45:35
I think you should add a chapter that has the snowball scene. That would be cute. Good story though. I really liked it.
2007-03-28 21:45:35
I think you should add a chapter that has the snowball scene. That would be cute. Good story though. I really liked it.
2007-03-28 21:45:35
great oneshot! keep up the good work and write another chap. i would really like to know how the snowball fight would end up... maybe with a few hexes or kisses?
Oh man, this really needs a few more chapters! I loved it, but it's getting good and it needs more! PLEASE?
2007-03-28 21:45:35
it was good!
2007-03-28 21:45:35
Aw!! Its cuteee! haha... loved it!
wow...keep up the good work.
I thought it was pretty cute. Short, but cute. You should definitely add to it! Maybe you can show the progression of the chats, from the first one onwards, you know? Great job on the oneshot, though!
2007-03-28 21:45:35
OH MY GOSH! Loved it. Simple. Short. Sweet. PERFECT! Keep it up, with good one-liner endings like that- the world of fanfiction is yours! ;)
2007-03-28 21:45:35
OH MY GOSH! Loved it. Simple. Short. Sweet. PERFECT! Keep it up, with good one-liner endings like that- the world of fanfiction is yours! ;)
2007-03-28 21:45:35
OH MY GOSH! Loved it. Simple. Short. Sweet. PERFECT! Keep it up, with good one-liner endings like that- the world of fanfiction is yours! ;)
i think it was great...and it would be even better if you added another chapter or two about the snowfight. this could even turn into a really great story. i love the idea of the morning chats! well its your story so you can decide, those are just my opinions.
Okay. I definitelly say add to it. The next chapter should maybe be during the day and their feelings to each other there. I think the snowball fight sounds interesting. Please make it more than a one-shot. AWESOME ONE-SHOT! (but hopefully not a one-shot for long) *does a puppy dog face* :7)

Author's Response: I've been thinking about continuing it a lot lately, but I'd have to find the time. And if i do it will probably be as a sequel. I really want this chapter to stay as a one shot since that's how I originally intended it. Glad to hear you liked it though! thanks!!
This was great! I opened it thinking it wouldn't be that good, nothing had caught my eye, but you're a great writer and this was very cute.

Author's Response: wow. thanks. i defiantly wasnt expecting that good of a response. thanks!!

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