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Please upppddaaattte! Quickly? Please?

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Love your story. Please finish it! I would love to know how they get together in your story if even if they do. : )

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Love the preview of the next chapter. Love this chapter as well.

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Like the last memory. Love the chapter. :)

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Love this story. Very interesting. : )

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James what have you done. You are losing the chance to get Lily!!!

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Lily is already starting to fall under his spell, : ) i don't think she will make it to 10.

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Poor James has not realized what he started. Love this chapter.

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Love this story so far. : ) Can't wait to see what happens next.

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I luv the whole story keep writin plz!

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really good, I think Lily has a very interesting point of view on the marauders, in harry potter. Its like she really likes them but she cant admit it, Its like that in all of the stories. You really caught the essence of it though

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More more more pretty please. You are fantastic. I love how this is going. And I am greedy. x

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Please continue!! it's really cool and interesting!!! please update sooN!

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Awww. that was a great chapter but I don't understand what made James so angry...?
Anyways, great story...keep writing! :D

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Reason number ten; I hate that you always make me feel disgusted.


Need I say more? Other than this is awesome?

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It is really good, i think that you should continue with the list but at the end of the 9th reason a line should read "Just one more but i just can't think of any" and FINISH IT!
 it is amazing favorite one so far that I've read. Also to make the story a little bit longer do the first date and her feelings about James Potter.

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lmao, oh man,that would be hilarious to do XD thanks for the review!

Hey! I'm loving the story, keep writing!

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Don't finish the list. No offence. But this could really make a twist in the story. It could make the story go to an entire new level. So in my opinon keep the fight going. But at the end, they date, that's my opinion.

Bi

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i def plan on finishing the list. no offence taken. =]  i just closure I guess this story has been going on since 2007 and I just want to end it so I can start a new one. =]

thank you for reviewing!

Awesome story! Love it love it love it! What will be next on your list (after your detour)? 

I hate it when you show off (playing quiddich)? 

I hate it when you undermine my attempts at authority and lead the younger students astray (ie. stealing the snitch)?

I hate it when you dazzel me?

Just some suggestions!

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hahaha, i like the last one! :) and you will get a hint on what is the next one in the next chapter.
Thank you for reviewing!

This chapter was cute.  I liked the memory in which Lily thought James was cute and then yelled she did NOT just think that.  Keep it up.

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yes, i think lily is starting to like Jamsie or not. lol we'll see.

thank you for reviewing

This chapter was okay.  I would have liked it more if it was written with more description as it just seemed to be a list of random pick-up lines.  There's so many other ways you could have wrote the memories by adding more description, but it was still cute.

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this chapter was mainly on James' different ways of asking Lily out. I didn't even intend to put this chapter in (but i'm glad i did, i think its the most popular chapter in the whole story.) i wrote at first for my pure amusement and I never got around editing it or putting in description or anything.

Sorry if it wasn't what you expected but thank you for reviewing.

Cute chapter.  I thought the memory in which Lily ended up getting blamed for the Marauders getting drunk was quite amusing.  Keep it up.

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yes, i thought the marauders being drunk was cute so I had to write it.

The memories were cute.  I liked this chapter.  Keep up the great work.

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thank you, I liked this chapter too! James was too funny.

Hmm, this should be interesting.  I'm reminded of my all-time favorite movie '10 Things I Hate About You' with Julia Stiles and Heath Ledger {tear}, but mainly just because the title as in the movie Julia Stiles's character wrote a poem and presented it in her English class.  But, anyway, I'm looking forward to reading on with this story to see where you go with this.  Good job so far.

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never watched the movie so I wouldn't know if it was similar or not. ^_^ i miss heath ledger!!! :[ 

anyway, thank you for the review!

Yet another great chapter, loved the first half but I just feel too bad for Sirius when he had to face the heat for that incident. I guess there would be more Sirius- blaming next chapter, poor Sirius!

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mmm, i love sirius too much to blame him for the whole accident.

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