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Ooh, the beginning was pretty descriptive and I enjoyed reading it. Usually, I find a story without dialogue quite boring, but your's was somehow different, Anji. It was short and sweet and I loved that you wrote about Ginny because she is one of my favourite characters :D

Author Response

w00t! Its Tahi! *huggle glomp*

Yes, I know it had no dialog and the prospect of writing that way scared me a little. But I did it--and, I'm proud to say--it was liked! YAY!

Thanks for the review--they mean the world to me, really.
-Anj

It's nice!  Yes, short, but not forced.  I liked it, and thank you for submitting the first entry to the challenge.

Ir eally liked it!  10/10 and on to faves list!

Author Response

thankies! Yes, thats how Mara and I felt as well (she reviewed yesterday) it was short, and could have been longer, but I thnk it would have forced to much detail to an overwhelming point. 

thanks...awww

:P
-Anjii

Anjii, that was absolutely perfect! I am definitely not one of the ones who hates you for making it 505 words. It was a short, sure, but the length definitely worked in its favor. I've never read anything like this before, and it was just a really nice drabble about a young Ginny. You've got her thoughts down really well and the description was superb.I really, really enjoyed reading it! Very nice job indeed. I definitely enjoyed it. Sorry for the fairly short review!

-Mara, :-)

Author Response

fairly short review for a very short story XD. Anyways, I gree, it did work in its favor for the reason that if I had added anymore conflict, it would have disobeyed the challenge rules (xelusivemomriesx's fun challenge) and would have made it to overly descriptive, boring. Glad you think I got into Ginny's head, that can be tough sometimes. Oh, so glad you liked it, especially because it ured my writer' block, I am rewriting the whole 'current' part of chapter three, but thefounder's part I actually really like, so its staying (so feel free to go over that if you wat, I finally got into your version of chapter one.)
-Anjii :P thankies!

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