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This is the best Harry Potter fan fiction story I have read and I have been reading it for about a decade. Please, please, please keep writing because I have reread this story countless times and REALLY want to know what happens next. :-)

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PLEASE CONTINUE!! OMG i love this story!!!

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Hah... I remember this story. It used to be my favorite until you stopped updating.

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NO! You can't stop there! It's not fair... *sulks*
Update pretty please? :D

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Oh, that explained things nicely  XD   I'm now content with James and Remus being...well, un-themish. I'm glad you worked in <i>why</i> they would bother with the charade, silly little first years  XD  But yes, definitely their most dramatic prank once it's revealed. I like the way you sneak all the connections in, that Lily sat with them for their first Welcoming Feast and has never quite seemed to believe they could hate one another...setting up her suspicions nicely. Well done yet again, though I noticed a few typos here and there...a quick read over should sort them out  XD Brilliant work, love.
Eylia

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This is...brilliant! One of the most original ideas I've ever seen with the Marauders, I think it might be <i>the</i> most. Gee wizz, I'm only say, one thousand words into it and I think I'm in love  XD  Not only is it all completely fresh and new to me, it's well written, the tone you've chosen to speak fits the story really snugly. Excellent work describing the AU situation, it wasn't forced, and yet we know where they all stand. 

Peter, oh, gosh do I love seeing a Peter that isn't drooling cheese-scented saliva. You've made me so happy, it's so rare to find a story that doesn't depict him as 'always was a dirty rat'...so thankyou  XD

It seemed a little odd reading about your James and Remus though, I don't mind it in the slightest, but it definitely felt weird reading about James the study bug and Remus the rebel. It seems so completely out of character. And yet, I see how it fits. James the only child, and Remus with his rabid bunny issue...And the Sirius and Lily being friends thing, another 'well done' from me  XD

I'm really in awe of this, it seems as though you've managed to think entirely outside the box. We've stereotyped them to such great extents from the few mentions we have from the books themselves that we seem sure we 'know'. I love that you haven't let that influence them, it's very clever. 

I'm done now, if you haven't guessed, I'm adding you to my favourites. Wonderful idea, all round. 
Eylia

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I really liked it, great job.

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This seems really interesting, I loved it!

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If you still need a banner go to: CrimsonEmeralds or email her at the_emerald_writer@yahoo.com! She's awesome! I love your story i just never reviewed sorry! Anyway, I hope you continue it since this story inspired me to write all of my marauder Era story. 10/10!

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please wright more this is the only one i have ever reveiwed
and it is the best! its diffrent. im asking one more time MORE, please?

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This is great!
It's really funny and you can really imagine it as it's going on.
Can't wait for more!!
^_^

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awesome- why haven't u pdated? :P Update, please?

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why havnt u updated

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Cool! Please update really soon because I love this story!

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I love your story. At first I was wierded out by all of their personalities they took on, but I absolutly love it. It really makes me think about how people aren't always what they appear to be. It's a great story and extremely unique, I have to say that I have yet to read another like it. Please please please update soon because its been a while!!! too long!

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your story is one of the best i've read on here. Please write more

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more thankx

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I adore this story. A lot. I don't even know what to say. There are a few errors, (like using waist instead of waste) but I don't care because I just wanted to read this update. Please update soon!:]

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Wow, I like this idea! It's totally weird thinking of them hating each other, and Remus being the bad boy while James is a goody goody. Haha. Good job=]

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Top notch stuff.  I liked it! Can't wait for more!

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Wow. I really enjoy this story so far. Its trully original I must say. I've never thought about this before. It's really intriguing and an excellent read. I'm glad I found it. 
(I don't really know the rating system on here so I'm hoping 10 is high?)

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Sorry, that last one was kinda rude, but i don't get it,why would you say James is a nerd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't get it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! James is SOOOOOOO hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! H.O.T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!!! James is NOT a bookworm!!!!!!! he was the SEEKER of the Griff. Quidditch team!!!!!! he was the LEADER of the Marauders!!!!!! DUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i HATE this!!!!!!!

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Lol, this chapter was a laugh, it just made me smile all the way through!!!!

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lol.  Your story is absolutely hilarious.  Perhaps, James will try out - that would be awesome, but he has to maintain his image.  I can really see how their images have trapped them and caused them to become who they are and who they want to be.  GReat story and keep writing!

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